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Old 08-24-2010, 10:33 PM
onlymymom onlymymom is offline
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lol, I know. I just went and weakened him a bit. Also, the Oblivion thing is not that bad cause it uses so much chakra that he'll only rly be able to use it if he wasn't fighting beforehand considering most his jutsus are fairly chakra consuming.
Edit: nvm, I'm gonna change oblivion completely. It's too powerful.
My guy won't be broken but Narako is kind of like a rogue elemental master, I want to keep him more of a mystery so that someone can find out more about him
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Old 08-25-2010, 07:12 PM
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am i the only one who made a possible hero?
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Old 08-25-2010, 07:59 PM
Hiro Hikari Hiro Hikari is offline
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am i the only one who made a possible hero?
Yours is certainly more heroic then the rest, but the story is going to be more of a group thing, meaning it won't have one person as the main protagonist.
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Old 08-25-2010, 08:33 PM
Susano'o the Storm God Susano'o the Storm God is offline
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am i the only one who made a possible hero?
that's cause the bad guys are cooler, besides, the stone guy is a possible good guy too. I could mystery guy being like an Utakata character. He just wanders. My characters are designed to be main antagonists. I nerfed them a lot than their original idea though because they were too powerful. Kuroshi was supposed to have lightning element and his attacks were much more devastating, and Zangei was originally able to have up to 3 extra souls. tbh, the only person who created straight out bad guys was me.
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Old 08-25-2010, 10:06 PM
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that's cause the bad guys are cooler, besides, the stone guy is a possible good guy too. I could mystery guy being like an Utakata character. He just wanders. My characters are designed to be main antagonists. I nerfed them a lot than their original idea though because they were too powerful. Kuroshi was supposed to have lightning element and his attacks were much more devastating, and Zangei was originally able to have up to 3 extra souls. tbh, the only person who created straight out bad guys was me.
Eventually my guy is going to play a big role and have an effect on the story (not a main character but I want him to have like a big scene with him as a teacher kind of?) but he is like a neutral party, he can swing both ways so it is kind of up to how you guys interact with him and his surroundings that will affect what he does.
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Old 08-25-2010, 10:22 PM
Susano'o the Storm God Susano'o the Storm God is offline
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Eventually my guy is going to play a big role and have an effect on the story (not a main character but I want him to have like a big scene with him as a teacher kind of?) but he is like a neutral party, he can swing both ways so it is kind of up to how you guys interact with him and his surroundings that will affect what he does.
for the most part, if Kuroshi is included, he will be one hell of an antagonist. I feel he should be like Pain. If you don't know anything about him, you can't win
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Old 08-26-2010, 11:42 AM
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for the most part, if Kuroshi is included, he will be one hell of an antagonist. I feel he should be like Pain. If you don't know anything about him, you can't win
Lol well we need more people because this forum is slow. but that would be cool
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Old 08-26-2010, 02:31 PM
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Name: Surasshu Ookami no raida
Rank:Anbu co-leader (Special jonin)
Age:18
Gender:male
village: Village hidden in the leaves
Clan: Ookami no raida
Physical Descriptions: 5 feet, 11 in. He has black hair that is spiked up. Hes rather short for his clan. He wears a ruffled jacket that he always has open, with a black shirt that has his clans insignea on it.(Slash marks ///) His eyes are crimson red and look like wolf eyes (Usually people in this clan have, yellow, blue, or green wolf eyes). He rarely wheres shoes but when he does, they are open toed. He has claws, but not to large, very sharp though.
History: When shurassu was born, everyone knew there was something different about him, because of his crimson red eyes. He got his name from the clan elders, because shortly after he was born, the inuzuka clan came and ambushed the village, killing his parents. His name means "Slash". When Surasshu was 4 years old, he could already start yelling wolf callls, which was rare sense most kids dont learn to summon wolfs untill the age of 6. The main wolf that came to him was a wolf named KuraiNami (means dark wave) who was his wolf guardian later on. When Surasshu was 7 he was finally given the right to have a wolf guardian, and the wolf they chose was Kurainami, sense theyve known each other for 3 years already, which is a great head start. When surasshu was 9 he entered the leaf academy and graduated with flying colors at age 10. Then when he was 12, he entered the chunnin exam and failed the first time, reaching the finale match. He then trained hard and re did it the next year at age 13, and this time, passed and became a chunnin. He then decided to take a break from trying to go on to the next level, and didint try out for jonin untill he was 15. People around the village all knew who he was. He started to excell in tracking and passed mission of jonin level as a chunnin. He then went up to be a jonin at age 15. He passed, but the elders decided he was better off as a special jonin because he was a tracker, witch he seemed to not mind. Ate age 17, he was ranked into one of the highest level of anbu, and leads his own anbu troop.
Personality: He has a really wild personality and tends to charge into battles, Hes smart enough to formulate a plan really quickly, and has alot of knowledge about kekai genkais. He cares alot about his wolf and any of his friends that are close to him. He will always put his life in front of others. But, when he loses his temper, he goes into a mad rage where his eyes start to glow red. Nothing changes except his ability to till right from wrong and his taijutsu and speed increase. The only bad thing of this is that every time he goes into a rage (Wich is rare), after the fact, he is extremely tired out.
Ninjutsu:
Summoning jutsu: Wolf
Summoning jutsu: Ninja dog, Garusta
Ninja art of beast mimicry
Genjutsu: none. NOPE, 0. Not even the basics.
Taijutsu: He excels in taijutsu and hand to hand combat
Fang over fang
Tunneling fang
Wolf fang over fang
Wolf claw
Wolf tunneling fang
Wolf art: Mad dance in the moonlight (Just a barrage of attacks while transformed into a wolf thru man-beast clone)
Ninja art: Tracking paper bomb (When an enemy trips the rope between 2 kunais he places on the ground or trees, a jutsu activates releasing some tiny paper bombs with his scent on it. then he can follow this sent to a person and detonate the bombs, although, the bombs arent as powerful as regular paper bombs)
Take down (A simple powerful charge, weaker than fang over fang)
Weapons: He has the basics, kunai, smoke pellets, food pellets, shuriken, etc. The only special thing he has is tearing kunai.
Other: His dog is 6 feet 5 inches tall when standing on hind legs, and can due all jutsus listed:
Tunneling fang
wolf fang over fang
fang over fang
take down
dynamic marking
Bite
Wolf claw

Ninjutsu:4 Taijutsu:5 Genjutsu:0 Intelligence:4 Strength:3 Speed:4 Stamina:5 Hand Seals:2 Total:27

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Old 08-26-2010, 03:33 PM
Susano'o the Storm God Susano'o the Storm God is offline
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So to sum it up...

Primary Protagonist: Ryuu

Protagonists: Kurai
Surasshu

Neutral: Narako

Primary Antagonist: Kuroshi

Antagonists: Zangei

I'll create some more antagonists if you guys don't mind. They are all going to be Akatsuki lvl, or possibly stronger...
lol, someone needs to make a female character. Also, I think we need more protagonists.

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Old 08-26-2010, 05:39 PM
Susano'o the Storm God Susano'o the Storm God is offline
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Here's the next villain in Kuroshi's group. He is just a part of the group and does not have a partnership relationship to Kuroshi until Zangei dies.

Name: Kawa
Rank: S-Class Missing Nin
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Village: used to be Mist
Physical Description: Kawa is about 5 feet and 9 1/2 inches tall. He has VERY dark green, wettish looking hair, that is a little bit seaweed like, and it extends just above his eyebrows in the front leaving his Mist headband (which has a slash across it) barely visible. His hair extends about an inch longer than the front on the sides curving a little bit around the cheeks, while the back slightly longer than the sides but not by much. His eyes are gray and Kawa's skin has a slight pale, aqua tone to it. Also, although he is fairly young, Kawa's skin has some wrinkles here and there. His clothing style is the same as Zangei. The only differences are that his cloak is grey and he has black bubble symbols on his cloak.
History: Kawa had a traumatic childhood. When he was 6, his village got burned to the ground and he witnessed his parents get burned alive. Kawa survived and was found by a mist ninja who decided to take care of him. Due to Kawa's early experience, he became afraid of fire. After this experience, Kawa spent extensive time in water which resulted in his skin getting pale and aqua color. He soon entered the Ninja academy at the Mist village. At the time, The fifth Mizukage led the village. Kawa then studied on Water ninjutsu from his father and became a chunin when he was 14. Shortly after, Kawa found some scrolls and studied on Bubble ninjutsu and became very skilled with it. At the age of 17, Kawa became a jonin. At the age of 18, Kawa and his father went on an S-Rank Mission. Kawa's father did not survive however, and stricken with grief, Kawa became a rogue ninja, taking all the bubble ninjutsu scrolls, and many other Water Style scrolls. Kawa just recently joined Kuroshi's group.
Personality: A little sadistic and prefers to drown/suffocate people given the opportunity. Obviously, Kawa's weakness is fire, assuming the fire user is able to hit Kawa with it. Should Kawa get rlly close or is touched by fire, he will have a panic attack. If his opponent uses Fire Jutsu, Kawa will usually use his long-range jutsu. Otherwise, Kawa will fight much more rationally. If he has the opportunity, Kawa will not hesitate to give fire users Living Hell, showing that he seeks vengeance. Outside of combat, Kawa is typically quiet, and likes to be around water as long as possible.
Ninjutsu: Please note that Kawa's bubble ninjutsu can actually kill unlike that poor excuse of a Jinchuriki...
Water Style: Jelly Shield - (Creates a very flexible and jelly like mass of water. It is a very strong shield due to it's flexibility and also a powerful offensive attack due the ability to slow or trap an opponent with its jelly-like features. Kawa can also sling shot enemy attacks with this jutsu.)
Water Style: Condensing Crush - (A very powerful jutsu due to a mix of being a deadly jutsu on its own, and the ability to set up even more deadly jutsu. It causes the water vapor in the area to condense and turn back to water, which then precedes to attempt to crush the target. Should the target escape, the massive amount of water can then be used for more jutsu. However it requires a good chunk of chakra to condense air vapor.)
Water Style: Condensing Vortex - (Same as the above except Kawa shapes the water into a tornado.)
Water Style: Frozen Flood - (exactly as the name says. Kawa needs a massive amount of water and chakra to perform it. He then completely floods the area with ice cold water. Those caught in it are likely to either die from the weight and pressure of the water, or freeze to death. The water is extremely hard to walk on. An S-Rank technique.)
Bubble Style: Bubble Bath - (This attack covers a large area. Other than that, do I rlly need to explain?)
Bubble Style: Swirling Bubbles - (Kawa creates a swarm of bubbles that spin around in a whirlpool like shape that explode upon contact with anything.)
Bubble Style: Foam Suffocation - (Kawa shoots foam from his mouth at his opponent which cover the target and suffocates them. The bubbles are very strong.)
Bubble Style: Bubbles of Eradication - (Kawa traps the target(s) in large bubbles. The bubbles then pop and whatever is inside them disappear, forever... Anyways this jutsu requires a large amount of chakra and the bubbles move at a moderate speed.)
various other high lvl water and bubble style jutsu
Genjutsu: Does not use Genjutsu. Period. He is fairly good at negating Genjutsu though.
Taijutsu: Kawa is more of long range fighter. He doesn't use Taijutsu often, but when he does, he could take hits.
Weapons: Basic equipment.
Kekkei Genkai: none.
Other: Kawa has scrolls to summon a lot of water if necessary.

To get an even better idea on Kawa's ability, here is a databook style stats:
Ninjutsu: 5 Taijutsu: 3 Genjutsu: 3.5 Intelligence: 5 Strength: 4 Speed: 5 Stamina: 4.5 Hand Seals: 5 Total: 35

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