Hey, Scythe here. I decided to give writing a Fan Fic Based around Naruto a shot. So I came up with the background info of the four main countries in the story. As well as full bios of the main team in the story, which is 3 Genin and their Jonin Team Leader. I also whipped up a lame world map just so you have a visual idea of the area. I have no idea what to call it, so if you have an idea for the name of it your more than welcome to suggest it to me. For now I'll call it Untitled >_>. All feedback is welcome pretty much tell me if you like The Characters and the Background Info. So here I go. I'll post the Background Info, than the main team's character bios in my next post.
There are Four Main Countries, The North, The South, The East, and The West. There are also a few Islands both large and small. These islands don’t have a very large Ninja Population. If attacked by other countries they will usually lend each other help in the form of Ninja. The following is a poor map of the whole area in which the story takes place.
The Northern Country
Ninja Village: Hidden Lightning Village.
It is the largest Ninja Village out of all of the Four Main Countries. They use mainly power in numbers. Or quantity over quality.
Village Leader: The Raikage.
Allies: No Allies.
Enemies: The South, The East, The West, and all Islands.
Clans: The Northern Country has no distinct Clans with Kekkei Genkai’s
Other Info: This Village has no allies and using its mass amounts of Ninja frequently assaults other Countries and Islands in hope of overthrowing them and adding any survivors to their own Ninja Ranks. As well as using the territory for further development. The Goal of the Lightning Village is to destroy and take over all other countries. They have progressed quite a lot over the years. The Northern Country once was divided into 3 Regions. With each region containing a Ninja Village. The Lighting Village overthrew the other village adding their Ninjas to their Village. As well as increasing the land they control. That was not enough though. Seeing what they could do, they set their goals to take over other Countries. All of the other countries despise the Northern Country and some times work in a joint effort to fend off the Northern Country from their territory.
The Southern Country
Ninja Village: Village Hidden in the Forest (Hidden Forest Village)
The Hidden Forest is located within the deep forests of the Southern Country. It is home to a few clans as well as the Koguri clan, which possesses a Kekkei Genkai.
Village Leader: Kokage
Allies: The East and some Islands.
Enemies: The North, the West and Certain Islands.
Clans: The Powerful Koguri Clan. Which possesses a unique Bloodline Trait (Kekkei Genkai), which allows them to turn parts of their bodies into vines and manipulate surrounding plants etc, they can also use plants to regenerate their own body parts. When fought in the South they are extremely dangerous. The Koguri is a very feared and powerful clan.
Other Info: The Hidden Forest Village is a very hard village to find. Its location is not known for sure but it is most likely high up in the lush trees of the South. Which is pretty much one giant forest. The South has a strong alliance with the East. They share info of opposing countries and islands and trade goods. The South has a few enemies in some of the islands. They are of course enemies with the North and are in many battles with them. They particularly hate the Western Country, as they assault allies of the South, even when the West can barely keep their own Country Stable with all the civil wars. As previously stated the South has a very powerful clan, the Koguri which are feared by the South’s Enemies.
The Eastern Country
Ninja Village: Village Hidden in the Shadows (Hidden Shadow Village)
The Hidden Shadow is located is hidden in the Eastern Forest. Which is of course located East from the Main Town, Shinjoku. Shinjoku is a large peaceful town. Fishermen dock their boats at the Tenshodo docks and head into the town’s markets to sell their fish and other seafood. Overall the Eastern Country is probably the most peaceful and to preserve that peace they train excellent Ninja in the Hidden Shadow.
Village Leader: Sakage
Allies: The South.
Enemies: The North, as well as enemies of the West.
Clans: The West has a few clans with unique Bloodline Traits (Kekkei Genkai). Such as the Takeda clan. The Takeda clan can manipulate fire as well as shadows. Their skin is completely fire resistant. They can produce fire in the palm of their hands much like a Ninja can produce Chakra in their hand. One of their Jutsu’s allows them to manipulate surround fire and do whatever they wish with it. They can release fire from all the chakra points in their bodies, as well as breathe fire from their mouth. While everything this clan can do with fire is unknown, much more can be done for sure. The Takeda clan can use shadows for stealth purposes, they can blend their bodies into any shadows, even their own allowing them to escape the vision of an opposing Ninja. There are other clans from the West but I won’t tell what just yet.
Other Info: The East is the most stable Country of them all, and doesn’t start any wars. They not only protect the peace of their own Country but also several Islands. As well as helping the Southern Country in wars of their own.
The Western Country
Ninja Village: Hidden Water Village
The Hidden Water village is located somewhere in one of the valleys of the Ryushin Mountains the weathers in the Mountains are always rainy. The mountains are in between the two main towns which are frequently in many civil wars. The Ninja’s often have end brawls between the two towns. Even though they have trouble keeping their own country stable, they still assault weaker Ninja Villages such as ones located on Islands. For some unknown reason they hate the Southern Country and often attack allies of the South to get a rouse out of them.
Village Leader: Wazikage
Enemies: The North, The South and any allies of the South.
Clans: There is one known clan in the West that has a unique blood line trait (Kekkei Genkai). It is the Mokabi Clan. They can manipulate water and turn their body into water and seemingly disappear into surrounding water. They can also turn parts of their bodies into water. They can manipulate water in any way they choose to such as create a tidal wave. Therefore they are very useful for attacking islands since they can blow villages right down.
Other Info: Pretty much all known info about the West was given above.
Alright that's the background info of the countries. Curse the 10000 character limit =/. I'll put the Main Team's Bios in the next post.
Here's the Character Bio's of the Main Team.
This is a Bio List of the main squad of Ninja’s in this story.
Name: Takeda Shingen
Age of Graduation from the Ninja Academy: 12
Birthday: July 9th, 12 Years Old.
Height: 5’ 0”
Weight: 90 lbs.
Info: Shingen is from the Eastern Country and graduated from the Ninja Academy about a month ago. He lives in the Village Hidden in the Shadows, and is part of a Four Man Cell along with 2 other Genin and his Jonin Team Leader. Shingen is part of the Takeda clan which is a clan that possesses a Kekkei Genkai. Shingen is a very powerful Ninja and already uses his Blood Trait to the best of his ability. Shingen is very confident and cares about his teammates, and takes risks to protect them.
Name: Kyuuya Hayashi
Age of Graduation from the Ninja Academy: 12
Birthday: December 14th, 12 Years Old.
Height: 4’ 10”
Weight: 94 lbs.
Info: Kyuuya’s number one objective is to complete the mission. He wants to be recognized by his father Etsuya Hayashi as a skilled Ninja. Etsuya is a respected Jonin of the village. Etsuya never cared much for Kyuuya because he wasn’t very skilled or strong. Kyuuya wants to prove to his father that he can be a great Ninja like him. He really wants to surpass his father and pay him back for the way he treated him. Kyuuya is a close friend of Shingen’s. After the way Kyuuya’s father treated him he decided to live with Shingen and his family. He trains with Shingen and they both try to surpass each other, always seeing who’s better. They were both placed in the same team by some amount of luck, they work hard and listen to their Jonin Leader Ryouma Kasane. As said Kyuuya’s number one objective is to complete the mission which will help him on his way to becoming a greater Ninja, while he cares for Shingen, he does not care as much for the Genin Team Member Kyoumi Maeda.
Name: Kyoumi Maeda
Age of Graduation from the Ninja Academy: 12
Birthday: June 23rd, 12 Years Old.
Height: 4’ 11”
Weight: 82 lbs.
Info: Kyoumi is a kind girl and a member of the Maeda clan. The Maeda clan possesses a Kekkei Genkai which she has not been able to use yet. The Maeda clan once slaughtered an entire village under the order of a corrupt clan leader at the time. The Village had been high ranked Jonin and Chunin there yet they were crushed by the Maeda who’s Kekkei Genkai was immensely powerful. Kyoumi knows that she has this power within her and she trains hard in hope that she will unlock her bloodline’s abilities. Kyoumi has become friends with Shingen but Kyuuya does not recognize her as anything else but a teammate there to help him complete the mission. She is strong and does not give up easily.
Name: Ryouma Kasane
Age of Graduation from the Ninja Academy: 7
Birthday: January 24th, 25 Years Old.
Height: 6’ 0”
Weight: 143 lbs.
Info: Ryouma is an Elite Jonin. He graduated from the Ninja Academy at the age of 7! By age 10 he was a Jonin! While all his abilities are unknown since he doesn’t show them off. The Sakage puts a lot of trust into Ryouma. Ryouma cares for his pupils and protects them with his life. He is a very good teacher and his student’s learn a lot from him and his teaching shows during missions. When Ryouma was 4 years old a large part of his family was killed when the Maeda assaulted a village many of the Kasane clan lived in. Ryouma had left the with his parents and sister. When they returned they found many family members dead or close to it. They found Ryouma’s brother on the verge of death in a street of the village. He told them what happened just before he died. Ryouma was upset at losing his older brother and he vowed revenge against the Maeda. A year later the anger left him but he concentrated more on his studies and Ninja training and of course he graduated at the age of 7 and became a Genin. About 75% of the Kasane died that day leaving about 25% of them left. This number has increased over time. The clan had possessed a Kekkei Genkai but most of the users had died trying to protect their village. It is unknown if Ryouma possesses the Kekkei Genkai of the Kasane as none have been seen in the years after the massacre.
Thanks for reading, tell me your thoughts on how it's going so far, and I'll be starting on the first chapter =D.
Here is Chapter 1! I hope you all enjoy it. I'll make Chapter 2 and maybe 3 tommorow. Feedback is welcome of course.
*Somewhere In The Hidden Shadow Village*
Shingen! Kyuuya! The Ramen is ready hurry up!
*Shingen and Kyuuya Wake up*
Shingen: Gah, morning all ready.. well we better hurry up, Ryouma Sensei wanted us to meet him at 7:00..
Kyuuya: Meh, that’s right.. I’m gonna be the first one there >_>..
Shingen: Hah! Why would I let you get there before me?!
Kyuuya: Because... I won’t let you leave this room.
Shingen: Than how can you get there if you’re here with me?
Kyuuya: Shadow Clone Jutsu!
Shingen: This is low Kyuuya..
Kyuuya: Good luck Shingen, hehehe.
*Kyuuya Dashes Down the stairs*
Shingen: So I’ll have to get through a Shadow Clone. He thinks that will hold me here for long.. Pft.
Clone: Hyuah! *Kicks Shingen and he goes flying into the bookcase*
Shingen: *Wipes Bleeding Lip* Heh.. alright, alright so this may be harder than I expected. *Unwraps hand wrappings*
Shingen: *Dashes up the wall and jumps off towards the clone* Take this Huah! *Throws 6 Kunai with string attached at the clone* *Kunai land in a circle around the Clone*
Clone: Hah you missed!
Shingen: Wrong I was actually right on target. Shadow Manipulation Jutsu! *The shadows from the string and kunai wrap around the clone and squeeze tight* Heh.. let’s see you break out of that one.
Clone: AHH STOP!
Shingen: *Dashes in front of the clone* *Sound of Hand Seals* *Pounds Palm on Ground and Fire floods from his palm* Yah! Fire Style Pyroclasm Jutsu! *A tunnel of flames shoot out from under the clone incinerating it*
Clone: AHHHHH! *POOF*
Shingen: Now to get my Ramen.. which is probably cold now.. Curse that Kyuuya. *Runs Down the Stairs to the Kitchen*
Shingen’s Mother: Where have you been? Kyuuya already went to meet your sensei. He said you wouldn’t wake up.
Shingen: Well I was tired what can I say? Is my Ramen cold? ._.
Shingen’s Mother: No I kept it warm I just put it out on the table.
Shingen: Alright I have to eat fast so I can catch up with Kyuuya. *Slurps down the Ramen*
Shingen: I’ll be back later I have to hurry! *Runs out the front door and into the village*
A Voice from behind Shingen: Shingen, what’s the hurry?
Shingen: *Turns around to see who the voice belongs to* Ah Ryouma Sensei! You mean I’ve been rushing to get to the village center at 7:00 and your not even there yet >_>?
Ryouma: Yeah well I got held up, good to see you are eager to hear what I have to tell you three.
Shingen: Want to tell me now than?
Ryouma: Hm.. No.
Shingen: Aww darn >_>.
Ryouma: Let’s head to the village center and wait for the others.
*Ryouma and Shingen head over to the village center… but when they get there..*
Kyoumi: Shingen would you tell Kyuuya to listen to me!
Shingen: Uh.. what did you do Kyuuya >_>..
Kyuuya: Absolutely nothing she asked me why I was here without you.. I said I didn’t know >_>.. and that set her off.
Shingen: Oh is that all? He just left me in our room with one of his Shadow Clones and had it try and kill me so he could get here first..
Kyoumi: Kyuuya! What is with you?! You only care about yourself!
Kyuuya: … Take that back…
Kyoumi: No it’s the truth!
Shingen: You two.. calm down before Ryouma Sensei gets mad remember why we are here.
Kyuuya: Let her complain and yell at me if she wants.. *Chuckles*
Kyoumi: I’ll whipe that smile off your face Kyuuya! Ya!
Next time! What will happen in the fight between Kyuuya and Kyoumi??
Well, here is Chapter 2 of my story. I would appreciate it if someone other than my little cousin gave me feedback >.> So here it is.
Kyoumi’s Kekkei Genkai, Unlocked!
Kyuuya: Heh, you’re gonna do what?
Kyoumi: Don’t act like you didn’t hear me! *Jumps Up in the Air and tosses 4 Kunai at Kyuuya*
Kyuuya: *Dodges all the Kunai* I thought you said you were gonna whipe the smile off my face eh? *Charges in front of Kyoumi*
Kyoumi: Ya! *Throws a kick at Kyuuya’s Head*
Kyuuya: *Crouches down to dodge the kick* You missed.. *Punches Kyoumi In the stomach*
Kyoumi: *Coughs out blood*
Kyuuya: Don’t ever try that again. *Throws Kyoumi down on the ground*
Shingen: Kyuuya stop what are you doing? *Begins to run at Kyuuya*
Ryouma: *Grabs Shingen’s Shoulder* Don’t, let’s see what Kyoumi does, alright?
Shingen: But… alright…
Kyuuya: Not so tough now are you?
Kyoumi: *Stands up slowly holding onto stomach* Why, why do you have to be like this… We are part of the same team, why can’t you accept that…?
Kyuuya: I know we are part of the same team… and I do accept that. I’m not out to make friends. I’m here to become a better Ninja than I am. To become stronger than my father… and show him I’m not worthless… Shingen is the only person is trust, he’s never done anything wrong to me, he’s been a good friend. But we compete you see? Why are you making such a big deal out of nothing? We competed to get here first. No big deal, Shingen doesn’t care.
Kyoumi: Shingen said the clone tried to kill him!
Kyuuya: Pft, the clone was weak and just a distraction to slow him down, nothing else. I wouldn’t kill Shingen.
Kyoumi: How can we work as a team if you look down on me! *Eyes Glow Green, Red, Brown, Blue*
Kyuuya: What the…?
Ryouma: Ah, this Is what I was waking for, Kyoumi’s anger unlocked her Kekkei Genkai. Now we shall see what it is… if she even knows herself.
Kyoumi: *Eyes flash Green, Red Brown and Blue, than her pupil turns Brown* *Pupil multiples and 3 more pupils appear around the main pupil and spin around and than stop* Is this.. my Kekkei Genkai…?
Ryouma: I knew it… it’s Kyoumi’s Kekkei Genkai, the Kekkei Genkai of the Maeda Clan. The Elemental Eye.
Shingen/Kyuuya: Elemental Eye…?
Ryouma: Yes… it allows her to control the elements. She has just unlocked the first stage of the eye, Earth Manipulation. Her eye turned Brown which is the color for earth, and all the extra pupils are brown too. So she can now manipulate the element of earth. If she unlocks multiple Elemental Manipulations she can combine elements for a deadly combination…
Kyoumi: Well… I guess I didn’t have to look far for a explanation of this… I didn’t even know myself what it did… *Stairs at Kyuuya*
Kyuuya: Pft, so what your eye color changed. That means nothing. *Jumps over Kyoumi and attempts to kick her in the back*
Kyoumi: Ya! *Raises her hand* *Multiple Spires of rock shoot out of the ground and pierce Kyuuya*
Kyoumi: Take this! *Puts her hands on the ground, a brown colored chakra runs around the area Kyuuya is in* I hope you like falling… *Throws her hands up in the air and the huge piece of earth flies into the air than falls down*
Kyuuya: *Crashes into the ground and spires subside into the ground* Gah… I can hardly move.
Ryouma: *Dashes at Kyuuya* Heh, sorry Kyuuya but I wanted to see what she could do.
Kyoumi: *Eyes turn back to her normal color purple* That takes a lot out of you. I’m feeling pretty exhausted…
Ryouma: I’m sure you do. Now that we are all here, I’ll tell you why I wanted us all to meet here. First was to figure out someway to unlock Kyoumi’s Kekkei Genkai, since it would help us with the second reason I called you all here.
Shingen/Kyoumi: And that reason is?
Kyuuya: Heh, so what’s the second reason?
Ryouma: The second reason I called you all here is…
Next Time! What is the second reason for Ryouma Sensei calling the team here for!?
Its good its just that all the names sound the same and it gets really confusing .they all start with ryo
Last edited by Kenshin : 08-19-2006 at 04:09 AM.
Come on people post for Scythe dont crush his spirit he will never write in fan fiction again
Last edited by Kenshin : 08-15-2006 at 04:02 PM.
Well, noone seems to like it seeing as your the only one that replied (And Your My Cousin and I told you to look at it). If noones gonna even say what they think about it.. I don't even know if it's any good >_>.. I'm not saying Im not gonna write if I don't get a certain amount of posts <.< but jeese is it really that bad or something? If so just tell me..