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Old 02-18-2010, 07:55 PM
g1bran g1bran is offline
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My Naruto CCG FF

It will be typed better in the other chapters since i did this on microsoft.there is no block format or rogue list and this is a yugioh gx version of naruto.


MY NARUTO CCG FF

It is the finals of Brandon Wheeler and Malcolm Brooks 8th grade match for valedictorian. It is late and Brandon’s turn I use my client michirus effect to pay one chakra to draw one card. I play my long awaited reinforcements mission card to search my deck for my Itachi genius in genjustu.Its time I end this duel says Brandon smirking. Malcolm if you use his effect you would only have seven battle rewards. Brandon that’s what you think Brandon separates his team to Sasuke severing the bonds/Temari Kakashi the eye that detection of the movements/Shino an Kiba squad and Baki able brain/Itachi, I activate Itachi’s effect on your 4th Hokage younger days which is teamed with Naruto overflowing chakra and Sai/Sakura squad. Attack with all three teams says Brandon who has two cards in his hand and has eight chakras Malcolm blocks his Bakis with Jiraiya and Shikamaru and Blocks Kakashis team with Sasuke cold headed and Shizune. Brandon says Kakashi uses Sense of fear Malcolm does not respond and Itachi uses kamui on your fourth Hokage do you have an response? Malolm darn you beat me again I guess you are up by one but not for long. Our Valedictorian is Brandon Wheeler but give a round of applause to our Salutatorian Malcolm Brooks.
A Months Later
Malcolm do you want to get in a few more matches before our entrance exams tomorrow says Brandon. Nah let us get some rest. The next day oh crap we over slept no time for breakfast Brandon and Malcolm get there bags and leave in a rush. Are we too late? No, you made it with ten minutes to spare with a smile says the nice lady at the counter. Phew that was a close one was it not Brandon. They head to the dueling hall the examiner says Malcolm Brooks head down your up. Malcolm says wow that was quick wish me luck (as he heads down). The examiner says you choose Malcolm says ill start I deploy my Shino Insect warrior which allows me to put in play one insect token and end my turn. The examiner I deploy Koharu Utatane childhood and attack. I block with my insect token. I end my turn. Draw sweet I play substitute which allows me to discard one of my in play ninjas (insect coin) and search my deck and put in play another ninja with an entrance cost equal to or lower than which is my Kiba man beast clone. I search my deck for Akamaru partner due to my Kibas effect. I deploy my Shion Awakened for the turn put her in the team with Kiba as the head ninja and her and Shino as back ninjas and attacked. I give you two battle rewards. I end. The examiner draw I deploy my Shikamaru Flexibility puts it as a back ninja in Koharus team and team and attack. I block and injure my Shino is that it the Examiner yes it is I end. First I play the 9th match and get my Rock Lee High Speed Move. I deploy him use Shions effect to remove from game your Shikamaru at the cost of my Shion and three battle rewards, Rock Lee and Kiba attack. Examiner block your Rock Lee with my Koharu and your Kiba gets a Battle Reward. Ill end my turn. I deploy Homura Mitomon team him with Koharu and attack. Err you get a battle reward. I end. I squad my Kiba and Shino and use my Shino/Kibas I discard Akamaru draw 2 cards and send a card to the bottom of my deck. Awesome, I deploy Naruto Overflowing Chakra attack with Shino/Kiba Naruto and Rock lee. My Team will block your Rock lee my Rock Lee plays shuriken on your Homura and now my Naruto plays Giant Shuriken on your Homura. The examiner that is all I need to see your class rank is Chunin the middle rank which most first year prospects go to. Malcolm goes to where Brandon is sitting. Brandon congrats awesome duel I hope I get into Chunin as well. Malcolm yeah I guess I think ill got back to mono lightning, don’t worry you will. The last match of the day Brandon Wheeler. Brandon hey what’s your name? The person he is dueling I am your vice principal, professor Crubs. No way why do I have to duel the vice principal. You do not have to, unless you want to become Jonin, we’ve heard of you and saw your graduation match against Malcolm so what is it? Ummm I think Ill just stay Chunin for now with Malcolm. Ok here is your room key and number.

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Old 02-19-2010, 12:08 PM
sasuke28 sasuke28 is offline
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i liked it. if u make a squeal i would read it. hope u keep making more, but u need to make it easier to read by putting things in quotes and other things like actions they perform in ().
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Old 02-19-2010, 12:12 PM
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reformat it................
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Old 02-19-2010, 02:44 PM
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It will be typed better in the other chapters since i did this on microsoft.there is no block format or rogue list and this is a yugioh gx version of naruto.


MY NARUTO CCG FF

It is the finals of Brandon Wheeler and Malcolm Brooks 8th grade match for valedictorian. It is late and Brandon’s turn brandon says:I use my client michirus effect to pay one chakra to draw one card. I play my long awaited reinforcements mission card to search my deck for my Itachi genius in genjustu.Its time I end this duel says Brandon (*smirking*). Malcolm says: if you use his effect you would only have seven battle rewards. Brandon says: that’s what you think Brandon separates his team to Sasuke severing the bonds/Temari Kakashi the eye that detection of the movements (2nd team)Shino an Kiba squad and (3rd team)Baki able brain/Itachi, brandon says:I activate Itachi’s effect on your 4th Hokage younger days which is teamed with Naruto overflowing chakra and Sai/Sakura squad. continues:Attack with all three teams says Brandon who has two cards in his hand and has eight chakras. Malcolm blocks his Baki/itachi with Jiraiya and Shikamaru and Blocks Kakashis team with Sasuke cold headed/Shizune. Brandon says: Kakashi uses Sense of fear!! (*Malcolm does not respond*) and Itachi uses kamui on your fourth Hokage do you have an response? Malcolm says: darn you beat me again I guess you are up by one but not for long. Our Valedictorian is Brandon Wheeler but give a round of applause to our Salutatorian Malcolm Brooks.


A Months Later

brandon says:Malcolm do you want to get in a few more matches before our entrance exams tomorrow . Nah let us get some rest.
*The next day*
brandon says: oh crap we over slept no time for breakfast!! (*Brandon and Malcolm get there bags and leave in a rush*). Malcolm says: Are we too late? No, you made it with ten minutes to spare with a smile says the nice lady at the counter.malcolm continues: Phew that was a close one was it not Brandon. (*They head to the dueling hall*) the examiner says: Malcolm Brooks head down your up. Malcolm says: wow that was quick wish me luck (*as he heads down*). The examiner says: you choose. Malcolm says: ill start, I deploy my Shino Insect warrior which allows me to put in play one insect token and end my turn. The examiner says: I deploy Koharu Utatane childhood and attack. Malcolm says:I block with my insect token. examiner says:I end my turn. Brandon says:Draw sweet! I play substitute which allows me to discard one of my in play ninjas (insect coin) and search my deck and put in play another ninja with an entrance cost equal to or lower than which is my Kiba man beast clone. I search my deck for Akamaru partner due to my Kibas effect. I deploy my Shion Awakened for the turn put her in the team with Kiba as the head ninja and her and Shino as back ninjas(kiba head/shiona & shino back)(Teampower-5) and attacked. examiner says:I give you two battle rewards. brandon says:I end. The examiner draws, I deploy my Shikamaru Flexibility puts it as a back ninja in Koharus team(koharus is head and shika-flex is back)(Team power 2 mental power 6) and attack. brandon says:I block and injure my Shino is that it? Examiner says: yes it is I end. brandon says: First I play the 9th match and get my Rock Lee- High Speed Move. I deploy him use Shions effect to remove from game your Shikamaru at the cost of my Shion and three battle rewards, Rock Lee and Kiba attack. Examiner says: block your Rock Lee with my Koharu and your Kiba gets a Battle Reward. brandon says:Ill end my turn.Examiner says: I deploy Homura Mitomon and team him with Koharu and attack.brandon says: Err you get a battle reward. examiner says:I end. brandon says: I squad my Kiba and Shino and use my Shino/Kibas effect, I discard Akamaru draw 2 cards and send a card to the bottom of my deck. Awesome!, I deploy Naruto Overflowing Chakra, and then attack with Shino&Kiba/Naruto(naruto is head squad in back)(Team power-9) and Rock lee(team power-0). examiner says:My Team will block your Rock lee. brandon says: my Rock Lee plays shuriken on your Homura and now my Naruto plays Giant Shuriken on your Homura. The examiner says: that is all I need to see your class rank is Chunin the middle rank which most first year prospects go to. (*Malcolm goes to where Brandon is sitting.*) malcolm says: Brandon congrats awesome duel I hope I get into Chunin as well. Malcolm yeah I guess I think ill go back to mono lightning, don’t worry you will. examiner says:The last match of the day Brandon Wheeler. Brandon hey what’s your name? The person he is dueling I am your vice principal, professor Crubs. brandon says:No way why do I have to duel the vice principal. VP says:You do not have to, unless you want to become Jonin, we’ve heard of you and saw your graduation match against Malcolm so what is it? Ummm I think Ill just stay Chunin for now with Malcolm. Ok here is your room key and number.
i may have messed up a little cause i couldnt keep track of who was who so lmk if i messed up?
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Old 02-19-2010, 03:07 PM
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yay, you used the last name i gave !

anyway, it was nice, also happy that chain lightning is in there, lol, but you need quatations and correct formating.


but it was a good read =)
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Old 02-19-2010, 03:16 PM
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yay, you used the last name i gave !

anyway, it was nice, also happy that chain lightning is in there, lol, but you need quatations and correct formating.


but it was a good read =)
yeah i fixed it for him, cant wait till i join the FF!!
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Old 02-19-2010, 04:20 PM
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yeah i fixed it for him, cant wait till i join the FF!!
im gonna be in it to XD

we were discussing it over aim alot yesterday.
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Old 02-19-2010, 06:37 PM
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it's pretty boring imo...The grammar is horrid also, I can't clearly read what it says. I hope it's better next time.

sorry
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Old 02-19-2010, 06:54 PM
g1bran g1bran is offline
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it's pretty boring imo...The grammar is horrid also, I can't clearly read what it says. I hope it's better next time.

sorry
its just the beginning its gonna get more exciting by chap 3
what was so horrid about the grammar?
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Old 02-19-2010, 07:02 PM
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im gonna be in it to XD

we were discussing it over aim alot yesterday.
yup same. i cant wait.
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