o.k. i no some of the recent chapters may have sucked but i just wanted to add some fights and get to chunin exam but from here on out it is going to get 10000000000000 times better cuz now there will be more story more fights that are important and more characters
Chapter 6:The 1st Match Begins Leon Uchiha vs. Marrow Kaguya
The proctor for the second exam told the two to come down to the arena and
explained the rules and the requirements to pass to the second exam:
Rules:1.No interfering with matches by genin.
2.No attacking people who are just watching the match.
3.No unofficial fighting.
Ways to Pass:1.Win your match.
2.Show Chunin level skill
3.Fighting twice and winning once or twice will only apply if there are an odd
number of participants, which there are 21 people so let the match between
Leon Uchiha vs. Marrow Kaguya BEGIN!
Marrow started to stare at Leon with a sense of intense hate and then Leon stared at him the same way until Marrow said,
"Leon Uchiha you should be a worthy opponent that Sharingan of yours will make this battle prove to be difficult," he smiled
and then lunged at Leon with a Bone sword in each hand Leon then activate his Sharingan and brought at his sword and
channeled Chidori Nagashi through it.
Leon then blocked both of us Marrows sword's with ease, but Marrow dropped his swords and punched Leon knocking him
back he then attacked him with an onslaught of ferocious punches and kicks. Leon dodged alot of them countered with his
sword, but thanks to Marrow's Bone armor the electricity didn't hurt him. His sword almost pierced the Bone armor
completely at one point, but Marrow had kicked him away started re-creating it. Leon then hit him with a Lions Barrage
tearing his Bone Armor with each hit when Leon delivered the final kick to the chest he pinned Marrow to the ground with
his sword and backed as far away as he could he then performed the hand signs for a summoning jutsu he then bit his
thumb, smacked his hand to the ground, and summoned a snake he personally trained who is the the grandson of
Manda:Shimahebi who was purple with black stripes. Shimahebi then attacked Marrow while Sasuke began to perform hand
signs for Chidori.
Marrow then managed to grab the sword and pull it out and stand up. He then through the sword to at Shimahebi who
dodged it and kept coming he then made two Bone clones and sent them after the Shimahebi. Shimahebi destroyed both
but was hit with a Larch Dance when he tried to coil around Marrow he then dissapeared in a poof of smoke. Leon then
rushed in hitting Marrow who had luckily re-created his Bone armor, but Mat Marrow's armor was destroyed by the chidori
and he also suffered fatal wounds as soon as that happened Marrow said,"Well I guess you proved to difficult for me I hope
one day we can fight again when I'm stronger," he smiled and the passed out.
Leon then said,"I hope we can to Marrow," he then went join his team. Then te 2nd exam proctor told everyone the next
match and it was......
Kai Uzumaki vs. Susume
Kai then noticed the gourd on Sasume's back and then realized he was the son of Gaara of the Desert. Sasume then
said,"You are the son of Naruto Uzumaki, The Seventh Hokage aren't you?"
"Yes and You are the son of Garra, The Fifth Kazekage aren't you?" Kai said.
The 2nd exam proctor then told them to begin. Sasume made the first move, he threw a few Sand Shuriken at Kai. Kai
knew that Sasume had to have a small quantity of the Shukaku's Chakra, so he decided to use his Mini-Kyuubi's Chakra. He
managed to easily stop the shuriken and run up to Sasume at a high speed and punch him. At the moment Sasume
managed to grap Kai's leg with a Sand Coffin, but Kai broke out of it and created a Rasengan. But Sasume created a Sand
Sphere around, so he would have to use the Rasengan to destroy it.
Kai then used the Rasengan to destroy it, but he had created a second Rasengan and had bean to run at Sasume. Sasume
then created a Armor of Sand around himself and used a Sand Sphere to surround himself and act as a sheld the Rasengan
hit doing slight damage to Sasume. He then attacked Kai with a Sand Clone, twenty Sand Shuriken, and re-created his
Sand Armor. But Kai managed to only get hit with three Sand Shuriken and destroy the Sand Clone with three Shadow
Clones he had created.
Sasume then attacked the clones with a Giant Sand Burial destroying them and Kai. But it was just a clone he destroyed
and then Kai came up from behind Sasume and hit him with a Rasengan. Kai then stopped using his Mini-Kyuubi's Chakra and
went to look at Sasume who had been knocked out and was being carried off by medical ninja. After seeing that Sasume
wasn't going to die Kai then went to meet up with his teammates and wait for the next pairings which were.........
Next Time:Kabuki vs. Taya Nara
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sorry buy i didnt know the Uchiha clan can use chidori i thought the only Uchiha that can use it is emo kid. simply because thats one of kakashi jutsu
This takes place 25 years in the future and they were taught it by their father Sasuke
Last edited by SharinganSasuke2 : 08-11-2009 at 12:11 PM.
k gonna start writing again but ill try to improve quality like i love to write fan fics still cuz idk y but it wasn't as fun as first time b4 i quit naruto and other thing so im gonna give it another try so........ here it is
Chapter 7:Kabuki vs. Taya Nara
"Hello" Kabuki said.
"Hi" Taya responded.
"Well you better get ready to die you ugly.....boy?"
Then Taya looked at him like she was going to tear out his spine and
use it to choke him to death. The proctor then decided to start the match
and Taya was the first to strike she tried catching him in her Shadow
Possession Jutsu but when her shadow touched his he managed to keep
moving. For a moment she was frozen trying to think how it didn't work and
then he came in with a punch. He was to slow and she blocked it with her
closed fan, opened it, and used a Wind Scythe Jutsu on him that is when she
realized it was a puppet! He then appeared from behind a tree with two other
puppets and the other came back they were Kankuro's old puppets Crow,
Salamander, and Black Ant.
She decided that it would be best to stick to wind jutsu until there
was an opening. Kabuki then decided to attack her with Black, Crow, and try
to pull off an Secret Black Move: Iron Maiden, but Temari had taught Taya
a lot about her siblings abilities and since Kabuki's techniques were the same
as Kankuro's she easily knew how to counter it. Taya then used a Great
Cutting Whirlwind that almost destroyed both puppets. But Kabuki managed
to save himself by using Salamander as a shield because these puppets were
useless to him he then got out a scroll that read "Elemental Strike" and said
"Well I'll use these on you they aren't my best but they should do for you!"
Kabuki then summoned Five puppets each with a different elemental
symbol on their forehead. He then had them attack The "Lightning" puppet
channeled Chidori Nagashi through its body, the "Water" Puppet created two
flamethrower like weapons in its hand that fired intense water streams that
could cut down a tree, the "Fire" Puppet created two flamethrower like
weapons in its hand that fired streams of fire that could easily melt kunai,
shuriken,and other steel weapons, the "Earth" Puppet created two long
katanas made of rock that could break a boulder in half, and the "Wind"
Puppet created two flamethrower like weapons in its hand that fired intense
wind streams that acted like swords and could cut down a tree. But Kabuki
could only control two of them at the same time and had to use his chakra
to perform their attacks.
Kabuki the attacked with the "Wind" and "Fire" element puppets
knowing they'd be useful against her. The "Wind" puppet attacked her and
kept missing.But the "Fire" puppet was shooting flames at her and she
decided to use her newest technique. She then used a Shadow Stitching
Jutsu and nailed the "Fire"puppet to the ground and hit the other puppet
with it too doing the same. Kabuki then got extremely terrifying and tryed to
control the other three at once and started yelling at her saying "Come on
MAN you really need to stop acting like a little homo you stupid little BOY!"
Taya decided to ignore the puppets he was controlling and hit him with
a Shadow Stitching Jutsu she managed to get his arm. But she had forgotten
about the puppets! They hit her with a jet of water, Earth Katanas, and
shocked her leaving her unconscious. Kabuki then unsummoned the puppets
and received medical attention while the proctor announced him as the
winner. The Proctor then announced the next match of the second exam and
it was Tai Uchiha vs. Ken Hyuga
Next Time Chapter 8:Ken vs. Tai Battle of the Eyes
P.S. I liked it this time so I'll continue
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I'm gonna rewrite or just fix some mistakes in the other chapters to make them better prolly be done in 1-3 hours
Last edited by SharinganSasuke2 : 09-12-2009 at 08:30 PM.
I'm going to try to post more chapters probably daily, but homework and other things get in the way Im also going to write a prologue to clear some things up will be more essay like than story like and enjoy
First off Sasuke helps Naruto kill Madara/Tobi and he comes back to village. Secondly the pairings happen like SasuSaku and NaruHina, but the old characters will rarely be used besides pairings. Next Konan amd Kurenai have a child and Konan's kid will appear in a few more chapters. If you have other questions just ask I couldn't think of much back story for them. Tai and Leon only have 3 tomoe sharingan, Susume has mini Shukaku because all the tailed beasts were given hosts after Madara died so they gave Gaara Shukkaku back
and I'll show other jinchurikis later.
Since Prologue was short I added a short chapter chapter.
Chapter 8:Ken vs. Tai Battle of the Eyes
Ken and Tai stepped into the arena waiting for the match to begin they
didn't like having to fight each other and they stood their silently waiting.
Then the proctor told them to begin and Tai finally spoke,"Well if we have to
fight we shouldn't hold back, so you better be ready,".
She then ran at him with her Sharingan activated and punched him in the
face as he stood their unable to move and then he snapped out of it and
said,"Well if that's what you want,"
Ken then ran at her with Byakugan and punched her in her face. They both
smiled and began to fight for real. She backed away and started to perform
the hand signs for a Fireball Jutsu and then Ken used Rotation to stop the
attack. But Ken hadn't noticed she had disappeared, but before he could
react he was hit with a Lightning Sword. He then started to cough up blood
as he pulled the sword out. Tai was angry at herself thinking Ken was going
to die because of her.
Ken then stopped coughing and took the opportunity to hit her with an 8 Trigrams:64 Palms. She couldn't react and
because of it she could barely use her jutsu, so she was at the disadvantage. But Ken could barely move because the
lightning coursing through his body. Tai decided she would need to finish it with one move and then she got very far ken
and rushed in with a Chidori, but Ken put most of his chakra into a Rotation and they collided in a huge explosion. Smoke
was everywhere once it cleared though Ken was passed out on the floor while Tai was barely standing.
Tai was then announced he winner and they were both rushed to the hospital. The 2nd exam proctor then announced
the next pairings......
Next time Chapter 9:Finally Dashad's turn
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:P i lied im going to write some new chapters though ill try to make up for absence with OVER 9000 CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
haven't had the time to write
Finally found time to write I was finishing a lot of homework ans stuff for the entire nine weeks so i could have more time.
Chapter 9: Finally Dashad's Turn
The proctor announced the pairings: Dashad Yamanaka vs. Sorrow
Dashad was thrilled he had been waiting so long to fight, but now he felt
afraid because he felt that his opponent would be extremely strong. His eyes
were odd, but looking at then he thought they were the infamous Rinnegan
and he was correct. As they stepped into the arena they both glared at
each other. "BEGIN!!!" said the proctor
Dashad was the first to attack he painted three wolves on a scroll and
summoned them to attack. Sorrow separated into many pieces of paper and
the wolves' attacks missed. He then morphed the pieces of paper into
shuriken and they were all sent flying at Dashad who drew a wall of ink and
summoned it. As the shurikens hit the wall the became damp with ink and fell
to the ground Sorrow tried reforming, but it proved to be difficult task he
manged to return to his original form but was stuck to the ground by ink that
was Dashad's special type that was very stick and hard to remove, but he
only had a small amount because of the rarity of the materials needed to
Dashad then had the wolves attack a defenseless Sorrow who summoned
two of his Six Paths. One of them was used for healing and the other used
swords of various types to fight along with other weapons and taijutsu. The
healing Path removed the ink from Sorrow while the Weapon Path used a
sensor nodes used to send information the Paths as a sword he then
destroyed the wolves with a few swift swipes. But Dashad had begun to
draw a large Chinese Dragon after he finished he summoned and it was
extremely large. He sent it after the Weapon Path and he breathed a Ink
Fireball, but the the Weapon Path easily dodged and sliced at the dragon.
But he didn't destroy and as he did that the dragon wrapped around him. The
Weapon Path who was encased in the long Dragon summoned a large number
of large blades that pierced the dragon from all sides destroying he then
charged at Dashad and destroyed his scroll.
Dashad then Used Mind Disturbance Jutsu to have the Weapon Path attack
Sorrow and the other Path, but the Weapon Path just collapsed on the
ground along with the Healing Path. This confused Dashad until he was
slashed by a sensor node that was being held by Sorrow. Dashad then tried
to attack Sorrow with a kunai, but Sorrow turned himself into paper then
Dashad drew knives on the paper, summoned them and had them fly at the
pieces of paper. They then hit a few of the pieces of paper he managed to
reform, but received many lacerations. Sorrow then struck Dashad right
below the heart with a sensor node.
Sorrow then made Dashad quit to avoid unnecessary violence. He was then
announced the winner of the match.The proctor then began to announce the
Next Time:Battle of Strangers
Alright hope you like it give me feedback if you feel like it and if you have
any ideas, characters you want to be put in, or other things tell me.
Chapter 9:Battle of Strangers
The Proctor said that the next two participants were both Sorrow's
teammates. As Sorrow listened to the announcing of the next two
combatants he noticed Kai and Leon talking and decided to talk to them.
"Hello my name is Sorrow,"said Sorrow.
"Hello my name is Leon Uchiha," said Leon.
"Hi my name is Kai,"said Kai.
"So what was that technique you used during your fight?" Kai and Leon said
"Its a technique my father Nagato used that I have made my own," said
"NAGATO!? You mean the guy who invaded the Leaf Village and was
defeated by Naruto Uzumaki my father!?" said Kai.
"Yes, but I'm guessing you don't know the full story do you?" said Sorrow.
"No,"Kai and Leon said. Sorrow then told them everything that about Pein
leading up till his death.
They all then looked at the arena and noticed the battle was over and ended
in a draw and that both of Sorrow's teammates were dead.
"They never did like each other.........But I figured I'd have to be the one to
kill them to stop them from destroying me they never like me because they
never were very nice always angry never feeling any other emotion," said
Sorrow in a sad voice.The proctor then announced that the next match
would be Sasume/Kabuki's teammate and a mist genin named Kira Aisu
Right when the proctor said begin Kira drew his sword and killed
Sasume/Sabuki's team in a single swift strike.
"I figured as much," Sasume and Kabuki said as they joined Kai,Leon and
"Hey guys they fixed you guys up pretty fast didn't they?" said Kai
"Well they fixed me up fast because i was only slightly injured so I decided to
help them heal Sasume with a Healing Puppet of mine," said Kabuki proudly.
Kira then saw the group and came over to meet them.
"Hi my name is Kira Aisu,"said Kira and they all replied with their names.
"Im guessing he was your guys' teammate?"he said to Kabuki and Sasume.
"Yes but don't worry we were never close to him,"Sasume said.
"Alright then I wonder who the next participants will be fighting,"said Kira.
As he said that the proctor said that the next participants would be
Inazuma and a Rock ninja.
Inazuma then used Lighting Style: Death from Above and right when it hit
the Rock ninja he sliced him in half.He then saw that everyone who had won
were talking and joined them.
"Hi my name is Inazuma, son of Killer Bee," said Inuzuma and they all replied with their names.
"So you must have a mini tailed beast like us?"said Sasume and Kai.
"Yes," said Inazuma.
As he said that the proctor said the next match would be Kira's other
teammate,Mizukame and a Rock Ninja
When it started the Rock Ninja quit saying he didn't want to fight a girl
Mizukame then said the same thing and they both fought.The rock ninja like
his other teammate didn't stand a chance.Mizukame used Hidden Mist Jutsu
surprising him. Then she held a kunai to his throat and said,"If you didn't
insult me I may have let you live," an she then slit his throat and dissolved
She then looked up and saw the group as well as Inazuma did and went to
"Hi my name is Mizukame you can call me Mizu though,"she said smiling.
"She is also the daughter of the three-tailed's host,"added Kira and they all
replied with their names.
She then looked at Kira and blushed and turned to look at the others
"So what are you all-"said Mizu until she was interrupted by the proctor who
said the next match would be both of Inazuma's teammates, but they
withdrew because they only wanted to join to be with Inazuma(they were
Then the Proctor said that Mizukame and Chikyuu would have to fight.
They both stepped into the arena and when the proctor said to begin Mizu
used Hidden Mist Jutsu. She then appeared behind Chikyuu and held a kunai
to his throat, but when she did she noticed it was just clay and activated
her Mini-Sanbi chakra noticing the technique he was about to use. The clay
then exploded and the mist dissolved.Mizu was hurt from the attack but
could keep going thanks to the Mini-Sanbi Chakra. Chikyuu noticed the
chakra and activated his Mini-Yobi Chakra then he used C2 to create a
Dragon of Clay and had it make clay mines that he absorbed into the earth
and spread out using the Yonbi's Earth Chakra. Mizu recognizing the
Technique withdrew because she didn't want to die. Chikyuu then unearthed
all the mines and had the dragon swallow them fly high into the sky and blew
it up. He then followed Mizu to meet the others and said,"Hi my name is
Chikyuu and I am son of the 4 tailed-host," they all then replied with their
"I just let you win so we could fight later just to let you know,"said Mizu.
"I know I could tell,"said Chikyuu.
The proctor then said that the 3rd stage would take place in 3 months.
Next Time Chapter 10:The training begins for the 3rd stage
Yeah not many important fights just wanted to introduce the new characters and have some discussion and introduce
them all to each other.