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Non-anime pic, bad drop shadow, blurry, "injured" no quote, text too small, you need an "If you can" type effect cause currently the last effect doesnt tell you what to do if you can't. Also his stats sorta suck for a guy who's upside is cant die. Anyways, id give him better stats and say every time he takes X Damage you gotta discard X NInja cards in chakra to reduce X damage if you can. That type of thing would do well. Quote:
grammar errors, "discard", badly placed characteristics, effects not good enough it wouldnt do much, either have all ninjas with curse be hurt when he's hurt or make it so he can keep coming back type thing, like when he dies send him to chakra or hand. Definitley not sr worthy. |
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#42
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Sorry no prize this week i didnt get 2 new entrants.
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#43
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Oh darn, .25 points away from first... I didn't know it had THAT many problems lol. I'll try again next week.
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#44
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Oh well, still plenty higher than I've scored on other cards I liked better. Better luck next week.
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#45
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Alright ill be judging shortly.....
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#46
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Dude I already calculated scores and gave points. Maybe next week.
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Wow!! I didnt think I would win cuz im still a little rusty but im proud and a hell of a job to Venk,MJM,Anaki,cc2 and luzlim your cards were way awsme i really didnt think i would win so great job guys
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#48
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hey ur just as good a card maker as alot of us and personally i probably haven't made a card almost as long as you have lol.
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#49
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Congrats. I haven't really posted a card here so I didn't get feedback on what to do to make it better. You're quite the card maker.
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#50
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Well, okay; the first post of this week. Here is a Sasuke. I still don't like that he's Water, but I got around that by letting him sub the cost of Fire Jutsus with Water chakra, thus not taking away practically every Sasuke-specific card in the game (Chidori, Sharingan Eye; until they release another Water Sharingan user, making new Sharingans for Water won't likely happen, and Chidori? Well hahaha on that, for a while. We'll have to wait for Current, Senbon, and Kirin, for those; maybe Set 14?). You might have to face a little mana/chakra-bone, if you end up with the Sharingan(s) in your chakra area, and can't use it/them, but Sasuke isn't thrown in with no good cards (you can list many good, neutral Water cards, no doubt, and the Oro cards he now gets from this, but I mean cards that Sasuke is meant to use; he spends three years making Chidori rock, and they expect Water Sasuke, in a Sound Deck, to never use it. Well, now he can).
As for his main effect, he is a Searcher (for his new Itachi-extermination team members), but he has a cost to do it (he has to go off and find them, I guess). All in all, I rather like it, and he has a real rank, rather than an effect-granted one. He has Oro's name, mostly because the point of this card should eliminate allowing him to be in play with it. Also, Sasuke could thus summon Manda (and not lose a Ninja every turn), use Oro's sword (hazaah +5 boost), and I guess some cheesy Immortality stuff, but that's fine. Ambush, rather than Growth, because of the two names, and Ambush is cool. Since he's a Team Snake searcher, I figured having them in the card art made good sense. Maybe the next week will be make a non-Sasuke, Team Snake card. I know that the font is a bit small, but the effect takes up room. I was going to have the Oro and Jonin be effect, like the new Sasuke I have (Fire, but Sound), and it was way too small, so I moved them up to full Attributes, and made the text as large as I could, with it all still fitting. I know there is no shadow; I forgot, and when I went back to add it, the file went stupid, post-save, so I have to accept this as is. Last edited by venkelos : 07-26-2009 at 08:00 PM. |
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