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Old 12-31-2008, 08:50 PM
NineTailNaruto NineTailNaruto is offline
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thanx. I plan 2 be a lawyer, so these arguments help me practice.
oh gawd...
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Old 02-13-2009, 06:48 PM
hokage333 hokage333 is offline
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OK, screw my other character, i don't like him. here's a new one

Name:Negi Namizake
Age:12
Rank:Genin
weapons:A Blood-red sord that can absorb chakra from it's surrounding and adds it to my personal chakara supply
Appereance:Has Arbun hair and Wears A Coffee colored Coat with Black pants. Has large Blue Eyes.
History:Has Trained with kakashi and Hisashi. Kakashi has tought him fire jutsu and lightning jutsu. hisashi tought him gental fist teqnuiques. Also knows how to be uneffected by genjutsu. He has seen many people on his journy. He even saw naruto training with jiraya, but decided not to go and talk. Has many friends in the village including: Shayan, Hashim, Kiba, Shino, Neji, Hinata, Ino, Sakura, Iruka, old Man Ichiraku, Lee, Ten-ten, and many others. He Is planning to enter Chunin exams. His sword is his only inheritance. He comes from an ancient clan that has a hidden talent Known as the Copygan. It's alows him to copy and obtain any Kekke-Gen-kai.
NinJutsu:Chidori, Fire Style: Dragon Flame Jutsu, 8 Trigrams: 333 palms sword strike[hit's chakra points with sword 333 times while absorbing chakra], Gental Fist, 8 trigrams Plam Gaurd, 8 Trigrams Palm Rotation, Chidori Dragon(does chidori and while it's in his hand he makes the dragon hand sign, making the chidori go into a dragon-like shape, launchig it-self at the opponent and following him/her until it hits somthing other than it's user.), Fire chidori, Lightnig sword, & Brisinger(had to put eragon in here somewhere0 =}
Tiajutsu:Faster than lee and punches harder than Sasuke. Can Open 5 of the 8 gates.
genjutsu:Sharingan and mangekiyo
Kekke-gen-kai:Sharingan,Copygan, & byakugan
Other:Trains every day to kill somone who destroyed his village when he was 8. He moved to the leaf when he was 9. Has only his mother. his dad went MIA some years ago. Is now trying to find him.

Hope this dude is more realistic.
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Old 02-13-2009, 11:03 PM
Hiro Nara Hiro Nara is offline
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*sigh*
The ancient art of necromancy. Never gets old.
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Old 02-14-2009, 06:29 AM
Shadow Shikamaru Shadow Shikamaru is offline
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Name: Tsubaki Uzumaki
Age: 14
Rank: Chunin
Weapons: Small Sword
Appearance: http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r..._Monkeytai.png
History: [Unable to Access Files]
Jutsu: Rasengan, Rasengan: Double Strike, Moonlight Rasengan, Rasenshuriken, Giant Rasengan, Rasengan: Triple Strike, Giant Rasenshuriken, Giant Flare Rasengan, Sunburst Rasengan, Fireball Jutsu, Leaked 1 & 2 Tails power (inherited from Naruto, as it was never proven that it couldn't be), Genjutsu: World of Hell, Rasengan Wind Current, Summoning Jutsu: Dog
Taijutsu: Average.
Doujutsu: [None]
Other: [None]

Yeah, the inaccessible files cannot be found on my computer... by the way, I already have a website for an RPG. PM me if you want to know, anybody.
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Old 02-14-2009, 07:00 AM
ItachiAnbu ItachiAnbu is offline
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Yes, well, does anybody else see a pattern?

I'm not ussualy the guy who says this, but this thread was doomed to fail.

Everybody will make their characters too overpowered.

like I saw one where the guy had 2 kekkai genkai. Sharingan and kimmimaros. Ridiculous. this is never gonna work. nice idea though.
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Old 02-14-2009, 06:25 PM
hokage333 hokage333 is offline
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Yes, well, does anybody else see a pattern?

I'm not ussualy the guy who says this, but this thread was doomed to fail.

Everybody will make their characters too overpowered.

like I saw one where the guy had 2 kekkai genkai. Sharingan and kimmimaros. Ridiculous. this is never gonna work. nice idea though.
that's why i treid to make anothere character who wouldn't be as broken.
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Old 02-15-2009, 08:24 AM
UchihaClan01 UchihaClan01 is offline
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Also, you people should come up with your own KG. Don't use one that has already been used in the show or something. Its boring. Make it original. But I assume this is dead since thats what some of the post are saying. ahh. oh well. another epic fail.
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Old 02-16-2009, 05:55 PM
hokage333 hokage333 is offline
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Also, you people should come up with your own KG. Don't use one that has already been used in the show or something. Its boring. Make it original. But I assume this is dead since thats what some of the post are saying. ahh. oh well. another epic fail.
i did that.
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Old 02-17-2009, 02:55 PM
ItachiAnbu ItachiAnbu is offline
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oh well.....

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OK, screw my other character, i don't like him. here's a new one

Name:Negi Namizake
Age:12
Rank:Genin
weapons:A Blood-red sord that can absorb chakra from it's surrounding and adds it to my personal chakara supply
Appereance:Has Arbun hair and Wears A Coffee colored Coat with Black pants. Has large Blue Eyes.
History:Has Trained with kakashi and Hisashi. Kakashi has tought him fire jutsu and lightning jutsu. hisashi tought him gental fist teqnuiques. Also knows how to be uneffected by genjutsu. He has seen many people on his journy. He even saw naruto training with jiraya, but decided not to go and talk. Has many friends in the village including: Shayan, Hashim, Kiba, Shino, Neji, Hinata, Ino, Sakura, Iruka, old Man Ichiraku, Lee, Ten-ten, and many others. He Is planning to enter Chunin exams. His sword is his only inheritance. He comes from an ancient clan that has a hidden talent Known as the Copygan. It's alows him to copy and obtain any Kekke-Gen-kai.
NinJutsu:Chidori, Fire Style: Dragon Flame Jutsu, 8 Trigrams: 333 palms sword strike[hit's chakra points with sword 333 times while absorbing chakra], Gental Fist, 8 trigrams Plam Gaurd, 8 Trigrams Palm Rotation, Chidori Dragon(does chidori and while it's in his hand he makes the dragon hand sign, making the chidori go into a dragon-like shape, launchig it-self at the opponent and following him/her until it hits somthing other than it's user.), Fire chidori, Lightnig sword, & Brisinger(had to put eragon in here somewhere0 =}
Tiajutsu:Faster than lee and punches harder than Sasuke. Can Open 5 of the 8 gates.
genjutsu:Sharingan and mangekiyo
Kekke-gen-kai:Sharingan,Copygan, & byakugan
Other:Trains every day to kill somone who destroyed his village when he was 8. He moved to the leaf when he was 9. Has only his mother. his dad went MIA some years ago. Is now trying to find him.

Hope this dude is more realistic.
Ok, Hokage333 gets points for trying to help make his character less broken, but still, 3 kekkei genkai is a big no-no. Uber broken. Even two is bad. Also, certain others should try to make their characters more balanced(not to mention any names here). I'll make one, to show as an example:

Name = Aoki Kawazoe (Aoki = the Blue tree, and Kawazoe = Riverside)
Age = 15
Hidden Village = Cloud (formerly Mist)
Rank = Jonin
Weapons = A pair of swords, modeled after Raigas legendary swords.
Appearance = Blond hair, roughly 5' 8" tall, deep blue eyes.
History = His mothers and fathers sides of his family deserted them, for marrying each other. His mother died in child birth. His father named him for their great tree outside their window that bore blue flowers every spring. At age 8, he killed his father and left their house on the river, searching for a place to call home. He entered the Hidden Mist academy at age 10, and graduated with the rank of Genin under his belt, having killed all the other students in his year. He idolized the Hidden Mist swordsmen, especially Raiga. He once considered Suigetsu to be almost a brother. When Raiga left the village, he traveled to the hidden Cloud village, and atached himself to the Raikage. He then attained the rank of chunin at age 13. He has become rooted in the principles of the Cloud village, and would easily die for the Raikage. It was that same Raikage that gave him a promotion to Jonin. He has a weakness for being too soft with his enemies, which is why he was never promoted in the 7 Swordsmen. after his childhood, he repented his deeds in the Mist village. seeing this, the Raikage took him under his wing, and taught him even more about the lightning element.
Techniques = He retains all of the Lightning jutsu taught to him by Raiga and the Raikage (Thunder Dragon Tornado, Feast of Lightning, Lightning ball, Lightning Swords, Lightning Fangs, Thunder Armor, etc.). Most are S, or A class techniques. He also created his own techniques, Lightning Stream(B class), Lightning style: Dual Death Dragons(A class), and finally, Lightning Style: The Thunder Vortex(S class). He has some water jutsu, standard, B and C class in ranking.
Current Status = He is still searching for Raigas original swords, and for Suigetsu, whom he wishes to find and kill.
Notable Quotes = "The Judgment has passed to me. So that right here, right now, I will be your executor!" and "This isn't a game. Pledging your loyalty means laying down your life. Or at least whats left of it."

I hope this one was somewhat detailed and realistic.

Last edited by ItachiAnbu : 02-19-2009 at 01:42 PM.
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Old 02-19-2009, 02:31 PM
UchihaClan01 UchihaClan01 is offline
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i did that.
No, you took a KG from the real story of Naruto and Combined them.
and what the heck is Copygan? thats what a sharingan is. Make the KG your own. something no one has ever heard of. Other wise its just pointless and boring.
and so no, you did not do that.
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