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Old 03-19-2008, 08:49 PM
Ecvoltron Ecvoltron is offline
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"The Other Jinchuuriki"

(( I know Akatsuki Captured Isonade, The three tailed Demon, but bear with me... Please))


In a time of great peril and war, a time where the world was splitting into teams that were getting smaller and smaller and far more numerous, The Village Hidden in the Mist was in extreme danger of Collapsing. With The Sand and the Leaf attacking them, and only minor villages such as the Rain and the Cloud helping them, they needed a weapon, something that could turn the tide of the war around in a blink of an eye. Upon research of the leaders of both of their opposing villages, it was discovered that the Current leader of the Hidden Leaf, Naruto Uzumaki was holding inside of him a powerful Bijuu, one that had attacked the Leaf long ago, and caused many a lost life and devistation throughout the land of fire. The Nine Tailed Kyuubi was this demon. Upon further Investigation it was revealed that the leader of the Sand, Gaara of the Desert, and two former leaders were previous holders of the Bijuu Shukaku, the One Tailed Bijuu. After much deliberation, it was decided by the leaders of the village that Anbu Black-Ops were to find, and capture the Three Tailed Bijuu Isonade. Legend held the secrets of this demon to be the controller of water, and devourer of chakra.

Two years, a time of peace had come, and after The Capturing of said Bijuu, it was correctly deliberated that a single, fit child was to have the demon placed inside of his or her own body, to quickly gain revenge for the devestation of thier village. Seconds after this proposal, Black-Op Takai Iwasage offered up his New born son, and the Sealing Ceremony began, it didn't take long until the crying baby became the flesh container of the Three Tailed Bijuu. This is his story, the story of Jysbena Iwasage.

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Old 03-19-2008, 09:00 PM
Robert_Twilightninja Robert_Twilightninja is offline
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(( I know Akatsuki Captured Isonade, The three tailed Demon, but bear with me... Please))


In a time of great peril and war, a time where the world was splitting into teams that were getting smaller and smaller and far more numerous, The Village Hidden in the Mist was in extreme danger of Collapsing. With The Sand and the Leaf attacking them, they needed a weapon. Upon research of the leaders of both of their opposing villages, it was discovered that the Current leader of the Hidden Leaf, Naruto Uzumaki was holding inside of him a powerful Bijuu, one that had attacked the Leaf long ago. The Nine Tailed Kyuubi was this demon. Upon further Investigation it was revealed that the leader of the Sand was a previous holder of the Bijuu Shukaku, the One Tailed. After much deliberation, it was decided by the leaders of the village that Anbu Black-Ops were to find, and capture the Three Tailed Bijuu Isonade. Legend held the secrets of this demon to be the controller of water, and devourer of chakra.

Two years after The Capturing of said Bijuu, it was correctly deliberated that a single, fit child was to have the demon placed inside of his or her own body. Seconds after this proposal, Black-Op Takai Iwasage offered up his New born son, and the Sealing Ceremony began.

((Comments on the Prologue? It's short I know...))
interesting story sounds pretty good different time i like it
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Old 03-20-2008, 07:28 AM
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sounds decent, i guess
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Old 03-21-2008, 01:22 PM
rasengan_pwns_chidori rasengan_pwns_chidori is offline
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It sounds great, but...

how did they live for 2 years after capturing the Bijuu? With the leaf and the sand attacking them?
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Old 03-22-2008, 04:09 PM
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Ha that be a good point...

Not completely thought through honestly...
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Old 04-02-2008, 10:13 PM
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Edited Prologue, gonna start Ch1 in a minute... It'll prolly be up tomorrow
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Old 04-03-2008, 10:38 PM
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Ch 1: Civil War

Jysbena Iwasage was now Fifteen years old, as was the treaty between all of the villages. A time of peace was still among them, or so most from other villages would say. Civil war was amongst the Mist, but no one would tell you that. The Leader of one side was a great blind Shinobi named Tasuh Yagumi, and the other was a Newly-made Jonin Takai Iwasage, with his son closely by his side. A tool of murder, a tool of destruction. Nothing more was Jysbena to His father, and nothin more did he feel. "Water Style: Giant vortex." Jysbena said simply opening his mouth and shooting out a giant explosion of water, taking out four or five Anbu opposing him. "This is getting boring...." He spoke again scratching the back of his head, before instantly sensing annother being. "**** it..." He lifted his hand and blocked an attack from a Jonin. "Giant Chakra Abosorbtion Jutsu." He stated before the Ninja colapsed on the floor and Jysbena stretched. "There Isonade, You done bein a hungry oaf? I'm tired, take over for a bit." He said closing his eyes. "Mind Swap Jutsu." He said quietly.

"**** kid." Said a different voice coming from Jysbena's mouth. "**** it... I can't even use the extent of my powers, because this **** kid keeps my true form locked away now..." Iso-Jysbena said. "Oh well." He looked around and spotted several Ninja's, mostly Jonin, Coming in for a strike. "Water Eruption." Iso-Jysbena said, before sending off a large blast in all directions. "The kid was right to be bored though... Simple Jonin Can't Land a strike on..." He stopped mid sentence, turning around and looking straight. "Well Well Well... If it isn't My good Friend Nekomanta, The Two-Tailed Demon." He said smiling.

Tasuh smiled back at Iso-Jysbena. "I have no clue who your talking about Jysbena, but you've been mindlessly killing my men, and I must put a stop to that." He said smiling widely, a scythe with chakra strings in his right hand. "1st String Jutsu" He said Pointing the scythe at his opponent and strumming one of the strings like a guitar.

Iso-Jysbena smiled. "Genjutsu Hm? Easily countered. Release!" He yelled, not falling into a simple Genjutsu. "Now its my turn. Ice style: Hail Bullets." He said shooting ice spikes toward Tasuh.

"Do you really think those things would affect me? I'm blind, but you know I can truely see everything." Tasuh said, not making much sense, but it didn't matter. "Wood Style: Wooden Wall!" He said, tree's raising from the ground and protecting him from all sides, before residing and leaving him in plain sight. "Oh ****... I forget I hadn't revealed my secret yet." He smiled widely. "But then again, you already know... Don't you Isonade?" Claws of flame appeared from Tasuh's Fingers. "First tail of Nekomanta... Release."

"So that explains the wood Style Jutsu of the Hokage *******... Nekomanta I thought you would've let Kyuubi or Yamato kill you by now." Iso-Jysbena smiled. "You've made this Simple ******* Imortal with your powers Nekomanta?"

"Not Necessarily. I was forced in here by the "Hokage *******" as you so bluntly put it...

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A fight between Demons?
What could happen next chapter...
Not even I know X)

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Old 04-06-2008, 12:20 AM
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Ch2: Confrontation of Jinchuuriki

((Wow I cuss alot... I need to stop that... X) here's Chpt2 for anyone that reads this...))

Iso-Jysbena Stood there cleanching a fist. "Oh come now, you can't be serious can you? A simple guy such as that first Hokage character imprisoned you there?" He said beginning to laugh. "I can't believe that! 'Immortal Nekomanta, the Devil's pet' Was caught by A Mokuton?!" He snickered before letting out a huge laugh.

Neko-Tasuh sighed. "Your trapped in a body too Isonade... But enough Chat... I don't even really belong in this village, but you already know that don't you? I'm causing this civil war as a spy from the Leaf. I pose as a member of the Mist, and I cause your village to fall apart. That's not all though, I also completed the second part of my mission, and that was to descover whether or not the rumors about your village are true, but since I'm talkin to you, they must be." He smiled evily.

"Ha... You never were a smart one Nekomanta... Not once have I stopped thinking, and while your guard was down..." Iso-Jysbena raised his hand, and water flew up behind his opponent, "I was slowly, but surely, letting my water creep up behind you. Pretty smart right? I know." The water became Ice around Tasuh's body. "Are you prepared to die?"

"Hehehe..." Neko-Tasuh laughed quietly, "You think that with a Genin mind like yours working all the time, mine would stop?" The Tasuh-copy in the ice disappeared and turned into wood. "A clone my friend, simple Jonin tactic. I'm a tail weaker then you, but don't let that get to your head. The only reason you have that other tail is because of your Chakra-stamina, nothing more. My power could collide with that of the Nine-tails if I wished, but my poor chakra-stamina makes me weak compared to the higer-ups." Neko-Tasuh jumped into a near-by tree. "Thats it for now, I'm going to leave you in peril, as your village collapses... Goodbye, Isonade."


((No comments on 1st chapter? Wow does it suck that bad? =/ Oh well comment this chapter please))
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Old 04-06-2008, 06:11 AM
mztuhbrandon mztuhbrandon is offline
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i like it keep making more (:
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Old 04-06-2008, 08:05 PM
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Name Change

I want the name to be "The Other Jinchuuriki" From now on, but I can't edit the original title, so ya x)
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