my own version of naruto please give me ideas

[lord JP]

i have posted a series on my own version of naruto but alot of people dont like it so im asking for advice and ideas or a title please help

[Ninja]

1: Don't write in script format. Write in paragraph format.
2: Actually write more than...what looks like three sentences.
3: Learn correct grammar and spelling and, if you refuse to do paragraph format, learn how to do so right.
4: "My own version of Naruto Chapter (#)" First off, the title makes no sense when related to the extremely shoddy plot (if there is any) of your story. Plus, even if it was on the same plotline of the first chapter, it would be considered copyright. What I'm saying is change the title. It's asking for copyright infringement, which I thought I would have to report.
5: If you choose to not improve on the above advice, then stop writing or take lessons until you actually know how to write.

[Naruto Is The Best]

I don't understand why you would even WANT to change the story. It continues to blow me away.

[lord JP]

Originally Posted by Naruto Is The Best

I don't understand why you would even WANT to change the story. It continues to blow me away.

people hates it

[rasengan_pwns_chidori]

Originally Posted by Naruto Is The Best

I don't understand why you would even WANT to change the story. It continues to blow me away.

In a good way or in a bad way? If it's in a good way.... I'd get my eyes checked if I were you.

[Naruto Is The Best]

In the good way. I don't understand how you people can't realize the beauty of its words.

[rasengan_pwns_chidori]

Originally Posted by hidan&kakuzu

beauty??wtf are u high?

Lolz either: A. He's high. B. He hasn't read it but just thinks he can fool us. or C. He's a mule.

[hidan&kakuzu]

Originally Posted by Naruto Is The Best

In the good way. I don't understand how you people can't realize the beauty of its words.

beauty??wtf are u high?

[Naruto Is The Best]

Originally Posted by rasengan_pwns_chidori

Lolz either: A. He's high. B. He hasn't read it but just thinks he can fool us. or C. He's a mule.

I pick A, because I'm high off the greatness of his writing.

Don't listen to these fools. Keep making great fiction.

[Ninja]

He's most likely using an extensive form of sarcasm.