1: Don't write in script format. Write in paragraph format.
2: Actually write more than...what looks like three sentences.
3: Learn correct grammar and spelling and, if you refuse to do paragraph format, learn how to do so right.
4: "My own version of Naruto Chapter (#)" First off, the title makes no sense when related to the extremely shoddy plot (if there is any) of your story. Plus, even if it was on the same plotline of the first chapter, it would be considered copyright. What I'm saying is change the title. It's asking for copyright infringement, which I thought I would have to report.
5: If you choose to not improve on the above advice, then stop writing or take lessons until you actually know how to write.