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ch.4
kinsuke said "hehehe ready to get beat sensei" akito said "im not gonna get beat by a worthless peice os $&!% like you" kinsuke said"your gonna pay for that" and ran at akito with a kunai and a 1 tomoe sharingan activated akito grabbed kinsuke's hand with the kunai in it then kinsuke went to punch him with his other hand akito jumped over his hand and released is grasp from kinsukes hand and kicked the kunai out of it,kinsuke jumped to the side made handsigns and and said fire style: phoenix flower jutsu then 5 balls of flame shot at akito.akito said "pathetic scum" he threw a flash bomb and when the light was gone akito was out of site and a few trees were fire. kinsuke said "**** i missed where is he" then underneath his feet he saw 2 hands grabbed him and pulled him underneath with only kinsuke's head above ground kinsuke said "when i get out of here..." akito interuppted him saying "youll do what?you cant do anything to me you putrid peice of crap youre lucky i dont kill you right here and now" akito said "next is kazu.....ki u..chiha..." he looked at kazuki and he was still asleep.....he threw a kunai st kazuki's back kazuki dodged it and he was still asleep then kazuki muttered "lets fight person"akito threw a few shuriken at kazuki , kazuki gets up quickly dodges he said "nooooooooo my pancakes"kazuki dissapeared akito said "wtf hes so fast" kazuki came at him from behind and before akito could dodge he was being pummeled with tons of hits akito said "how can you be doing this your still asleep!" akito then got hit in the face and he flew into a tree...akito was coughing up blood and said "wtf is this...."kinsuke then laughed and said "my bro is stronger then kages when hes asleep" akito said "what theres no way this $&!% can beat me!! next time (in kazukis voice) no....soda not coffee...eh........gimme my pancakes now.. |
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yaaaay, i really like this one, hurry up and finish it
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(srry my last ch. wasent long i didnt have much time....)
ch.5 akito said "kage or not ill still win i just let my guard down" kinsuke screamed "MY PANCAKES!!!"and all of a sudden he was in frone of akito and he punched him threw a tree.akito yelled "ok screw this im gonna wake you up" he made hindsigns and said "mind corruption jutsu!" then akito passed out. kinsuke said "what the so kazuki wins...."then kazuki was sreaming "get out of my mind" he then screamed "no your not taking my pancakes!!" then he sreamed again "no gimme back my pancakes, i give up!! all i wanna do is eat my pancakes is that to much to ask?"akito woke up and said "that was easy all had to do is take his pancakes" kazuki woke up and said "dang man your evil..." akito said "well all of you are pathetic!!" kinsuke said "well it looked like kazuki was beating you..." akito yelled "i told you i let my guard down!!!" kinsuke said "right" and he rolled his eyes. akito said "whatever youre all failures "kinsuke yelled "then take us on a A ranked mission and well show you how good we are!" akito said "A rank mission eh.....hehehe sure ok.....tommarow you better be ready because it going to be your first A rank mission." next time (in kinsukes voice) is our first A rank mission yea what we have to take down 4 jonin from the cloud village! (srry its short yet again i didnt have much time >.> Last edited by hidan&kakuzu : 01-04-2008 at 04:05 PM. |
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wow, he does curse alot. ahh, what the heck, continue. 8/10
P.S its intersting story. ![]() |
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he curses a lot because he likes to p-i-s-s people off >.>
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ch.6
the next morning kinsuke woke up at 6:00 kinsuke said"uh akito sensei never said when the mission is" he went to try to wake up kazuki but kazuki kep muttering "noooooooooo my coocoo pebbles..eh..naw ill have a bowl of rice crispies"....kinsuke said "come on wake up" all of a sudden kazuki punched kinsuke in the face and he flew out the window he landed on top of a tree and it fell over......kinsuke with a bloody face said "okay....ill let you sleep...ill go wake up emiko..." emiko appeared behind kinsuke and said "im already awake...sooo why didnt you wake up kazuki?" kinsuke replyed saying "....well i tryed but.." before he could finish emiko interrupted saying "why is your face all bloody?" kinsuke said "kazuki did this after i tried to wake him up"akito walked up behind them and said "wheres kazuki?" kinsuke said "uhhh hes asleep" akito said "ill wake him up" he threw a kunai with a paper bomb attached threw kazuki's window. kinsuke yelled "nooooo dont do that my sister and parents live there to!" but it was to late and the paper bomb blew up and there house was on fire.kazuki,kioko,sakura,and sasuke walked out and yelled "kinsuke!!!! who the hell did this?!" akito said "i did" sasuke walked up to akito and said "who the hell do you think you are?" akito said "i think i am...uh myself" sasuke said "dont be a smartass i should kick your *** right here and now" akito started to laugh and said "you? kick my ***..thats hilarious you couldnt beat me if all my limbs were chopped off!" sasuke yelled "you dare mock the uchiha!" akito said "the uchiha..the most pathetic clan in the village the uchihas are nothing compared to my clan" sasuke said "fine then after your mission then the uchihas will have a showdown with the ryuuzaki's" akito said "a clan showdown this should be fun" emiko said "uh sensei shouldnt we leave for our mission?" akito said "right ok kinsuke,kazuki,emiko lets go." kazuki said "you never told us what the mission was.." akito said "o yea we have to kill 4 rouge jonin from the cloud village" kinsuke and emiko yelled "4 JONIN!" akito said "well we better get moving" next time (in sasukes voice) i cant wait till i get to kick akito's ***! to bad i have to wait till there mission is done.well next time they meet with 2 of the 4 jonin and it doesnt look to good for them akitos no where in site and its 3 genin against 2 jonin. |
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srry its been a few months.
ch.7 emiko said "so were are we looking for them at" akito said "well split up tomorow if we dont find him but for now well look around the cloud village because they have been spotted there" kazuki said "screamed IM HUNGRY!!!!!!!!!" akito yelled "shut the **** up you stupid *** piece of ****!!!!" *kinsuke sighed* and said "this is boring i wanna fight" akito said "shut the hell up you *******s!!! see you later im leaving for a while because you idiots are ****ing me off"*akito disappeared* emiko screamed "NOW LOOK AT WHAT YOU GUYS HAVE DONE!!!!! akito -sensei- is nowhere in sight!!!" kinsuke and kazuki muttered "were better off without that ***" all of a sudden 13 shuriken were flying at them *kinsuke activated his sharingan* emiko said "i geuss one tomoe is better than nuthin*kinsuke hit all the shuriken quickly with a kunai" he said "that was close" then screamed "COME OUT!" to men covered in bandages (looked like dosu but without the back hair and with the jonin vest) came out of the trees.1 of them said "this is gonna be fun shinjiki" the other said "right ryuga lets rip these leaf genin apart!" *they both made hand signs* and screamed "wind style:great breakthrough!"the wind rip down trees and slashed up the 3 pretty bad but they were not separated ryuga said "how are you still together?"they all revealed they were holding on to the same piece of wire emiko said "we were holding on the same piece of unbreakable wire so we stayed together" shinjiki said "what the hell!" kazuki was asleep! emiko yelled "what the hell are you doing kazuki!" emiko was then smacked into a tree ryuga and he had a knife to her neck and said "how about this bargain" you with the sharingan kill the sleeping one or she dies". next time (shikamarus voice) stuff happens zzzzzzzzzzz. Last edited by hidan&kakuzu : 03-30-2008 at 08:47 PM. |
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wowzers tell me mo
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ch.8
kinsuke panicked and began to think up a plan but then ryuga said "fine if you dont want to answer ill kill her" all of a sudden ryuga was kicked in the back of the head and got knocked down.kinsuke said "wow thanks" .....who are you youre leaf genin i see but ..." the boy screamed " OMG NO ONE EVER REMEMBERS MY NAME!!! IM SHUNZUKE GAMATATSU!!!!!!" kazuki woke up and said "who???" shunzuke screamed "**** IT!" ryuga got up and said "shinjiki find the jonin of there squad and ill kill these brats" shinjiki said "understood"then he disappeared. ryuga made hand signs and said "earth style:demonic tree incarnate jutsu!" all the trees in the area disappeared and turned into ogre's made of wood. emiko yelled "what the heck are those!!!" kinsuke said "there are hundreds of them!" ryuga said "formation capture"the ogres all disapeared into smoke. shunzuke said "whats going on?" kinsuke yelled "everyone jump there underground" they all jumped but kazuki was late and his foot got grabbed.they all came up from the ground the one holding kazuki transformed into a wooden box holding kazuki inside" emiko said "i know how to get him out "she used a shadow clone jutsu" 6 clones appeared and she started forming a rasengan with a clone" the others were trying to break the box but the attempts were futile emiko dashed out to the box and screamed "RASENGAN!!!!"she was heading for the box but 4 of the wooden ogres went to punch her when the clones got in the way,she hit the box and it broke a hole in it.ryuga pushed her inside the box and the wood grew back where the hole was and both of them were trapped.shunzuke made hand signs and then threw a demon wind shuriken at ryuga a ogre got in the way it stabbed the ogre then shunzuke yelled "release" a genjutsu hiding a paper bomb on the shuriken was released the paper bomb exploded ryuga yelled "formation protect" half the ogres transforemd into walss of wood and defended ryuga all off those ogres exploded but ryuga was untouched. kinsuke said good work shunzuke you took down half of them.ryuga said "that was nice but this next technique will take you all out in one shot!" next time (in emiko's voice) "where is akito -sensei- of course trouble happens when he's gone well next time are enemy ryuga unleashes his ultimate jutsu it seems unstoppable!" |
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not bad but thats stupid akito left on an A- rank mission because they were annoying him -_-
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