Naruto Legacy!

[hidan&kakuzu]

this is a fanfic based on everyones kids it is 30 years in the future with naruto as the 6th hokage after tsunades death.i know there are like a billion fanfics like this but i was bored and decided to make one>.>!the main character in the youngest of three uchiha's whose name is kinsuke uchiha.(by the way he has pink hair because his mother is sakura lol >.>)

ch.1
in the moonlight on top of the hokage rocks sat kinsuke uchiha thinking to himself "so tommorow is the day everyone gets paired up into squads...i wonder who ill be paired with" then says "all well atleast i made genin so i dont have to much to worry about." then his sister appeared next to him and said "what you doing here alone you pinked haired girly-boy" kinsuke said "kioko why do you have to act like a idiot?" "who's an idiot" his sister kioko replied then punched him in the head.kinsuke said "ow that hurt" his sister said "wow youre a wimp" then snickered.there brother kazuki walked up to them and yawned then he said "whats with all the noise you woke me up?"
then kioko and kinsuke both replied simultaneusly yelling "you lazy *** bum!"
kazuki said "shut up pink hair and flat chest" kioko replied screaming "what the hell did you call me!!!!????" kazuki said "you heard me...and o wouldnt it all be wierd if we all were on the same team?i hope we all are" kioko and kinsuke both replied saying "you jinxed me i dont wanna be in the same team as you" kazuki said"i have good luck so it probably will happen woohoo!"
they all said "well its time to go to bed"and then they all went inside there house and went to sleep.

the next morning.......
kinsuke woke up and yawned he got dressed and ran down stairs.he was about to eat when his mother sakura said"youre not at school yet youre brother and sister left a half hour ago...." he yelled "half hour ago why didnt they wake me up............**** i cant eat i only have 7 minutes." so he zoomed out the door and was running to the academy.he jumped in the room and yelled"just in time good...." kioko and kazuki said "o there you are girly boy"
a boy with a mask over his face walked up to them and said"just leave youre girly brother alone hahaha" kinsuke yelled "shut up shiito" they were all about to say something but choji akimichi came in the room and said"sit down shiito,kinsuke,kioko,and kazuki" they all said okay and took there seats choji pulled out a bag of chips and began to eat and he said "time to announce the squads"

to be continued (in gaaras voice)
"next time on naruto legacy....just a second why am i doing this.......i have nothing to do with any of this....


plz tell me if you liked it and if you would like a ch.2

[hidan&kakuzu]

bump...........

[yozeez]

ya i want more!!!!!!!!!!!!

[yugiohnarutotcgfreak]

lol choji is the academy teacher now and ya its good!

[hidan&kakuzu]

ch.2
"ok everyone i am about to announce the squads" then a boy was whispering to his dog choji saw him and yelled "koga inuzuka stop talking to your mutt"choji was about to eat chip when koga's dog jumped and and ate it out of his hand.choji yelled "i cant kill my students but i can kill hat mutt of yours"koga picked up his dog andsaid "no way why do you wanna kill ginta"
choji yelled "why? you know why he ate my chip"he looked inside his bag of chips and said "o.......theres still a lot left........ill carry on then"everyone in the room began to laugh choji yelled 'shut up!!!" everyone said "yes sensei"
he said now "ill annonce the squads" he announced squad 1 is kioko uchiha,
shiite hatake,and ronin gatsuga and there sensei is hiyori tatami squad 2 is koga inuzuka,nataro hyuga,shinsiro aburame and there sensei is agito ryuuzaki
the last squad is kazuki uchiha,kinsuke uchiha,and emiko uzumaki there saensei is akito ryuuzaki agito's twin brother"then he laughed.choji gave everyone a paper he said that will tell you where to meet your squad leader.
choji announced "o wait we forgot someone" shinobu nara ran into the room and said "sorry im late i fell asleep on the way here"everyone was stairing at here and said "how can you fall asleep running" she yelled shut up you stupid idiotic......." then choji interuped her "saying the next squad is shinobu nara,horoshi dedamarashi,shunzuke gamatatsu," every one interupted him saying "shnzuke gammatatsu?who is that"then emiko uzumaki said "isnt gamatatsu the weakest toad?someone way in the backed raised his hand he *sighed* and said "im......shunzuke gamatatsu."choji said ok...your sensei is me!...............shinobu nara said "then who will be the academy teacher?"he said "ino yamanaka of course she appeared and said "all of you that passed good for you, leave my sight i dont wanna deal with you as for the failures were gonna have a review of the substitution jutsu"everyone that was paired
into squads left as well as choji akimichi.

to be continued (in narutos voice)
o yea im hokage o yea o yea............o yea..i have to do the next time intro.......uh forget it i gotta go to the bathroom.

[yozeez]

more =) ilike it its a very interesting story

[bb3000ae]

Hmm this looks familiar *looks at The Razor's Edge" thread lol. But lets see it needs a lot of work, no offence.

-Ok so first, chapters need to be longer usually 3 pages woth on microsoft word in 12 font.

-Second, it needs to be organized. Spaces between when people talk and organized into paragraphs

-Finally, spell check is your friend for grammer and spelling errors.

This fic does have potiential, just clean it up a little and I'll promise you'll have people knocking down your door to read more.

-Kiyoshi

[rasengan405]

Originally Posted by bb3000ae

Hmm this looks familiar *looks at The Razor's Edge" thread lol. But lets see it needs a lot of work, no offence.

-Ok so first, chapters need to be longer usually 3 pages woth on microsoft word in 12 font.

-Second, it needs to be organized. Spaces between when people talk and organized into paragraphs

-Finally, spell check is your friend for grammer and spelling errors.

This fic does have potiential, just clean it up a little and I'll promise you'll have people knocking down your door to read more.

-Kiyoshi

LOL u right bb

[hidan&kakuzu]

ch.3 (warning akito sensei curses a lot)
kinsuke said "so does anyone know why our sensei inst here?"emiko said "maybe he is dead" kazuki said "maybe we should start a fire" kinsuke and emiko both looked at him and said "how would that help us in any way?"
kazuki said ".....so we can bake marshmallows" kinsuke and emiko both said "wtf???" kazuki said "fine if we cant bake marshmallows im going to sleep"
there sensei akito ryuuzaki appeared in a swirl of wind and said "hello there people,...so please tell me if you are worth training or if your wortthless sacks of crap" emiko and kinsuke both said together "wtf kind of question is that?!" akito said "cus i dont want to have to train worthless pieces of trash"
emiko yelled "youre supposed to be our sensei not a bully!" akito said "what all i did was say you guys might be worthless sacks of crap" kinsuke yelled "o my god why are you insulting us!?" akito siad "eh forget it ,im just gonna do a training bout with each one of you individually to test your seperate fighting strenghts"emiko yelled "dont change the subject!!!" akito said "shut up"
kazuki then muttered while laying down on the floor "no momma...i wanted the pancakes......why why...no i dont want waffles.."akito then screamed "what the #$&* is with that stupid *$$ piece of $*!%?!"
kinsuke said "uhh...hes asleep..." akito said "thats sad.....well he fails......now.....how did he get pass the academy...?"emiko said "whatever lets just start now" akito said "......you kinsuke....i think thats your name..whats with the girly pink hair?"kinsuke said "just forget about it you idiot" then he thought to himself "....this guy ****es me off so much...i cant wait untill i fight him...!" akito said "fine first up against me is emiko uzumaki"
she said "yea! im gonna take you down so quick!" akito said "good luck with that loser........well the rules are anything goes as in fighting and we fight untill i say to stop thats when i have a full aspect of you abilities" emiko dissapeared akito just sat down and pulled aout a sandwich and began to eat it. emiko ran at him from behind and yelled "shadow clone jutsu!!!" 4 clones then appeared. she went at akito from the back and clones from the front both sides and one jumped and was going at him from the top.he made hand signs and he dissapeared then 2 of emikos clones accidently hit each other and were destroyed.both clones went over to emiko and she said"to bad for you i already know the rasengan"she and her clones were forming a rasengan.
she then said"crap i dont know were to hit you were are you?!"she heard stop from behind her.both her clones disspearced and her rasengan dissapeared and akito walked up and said "you fail!"emiko yelled "why?!" he said "you dont plan anything ahead,you use a powerful chakra guzzling techinique and its a waste!"she was about to yell something when akito appeared behind her and knocked her out.he then said "yea...she was getting annoying" he said"next is kinsuke uchiha"

next time (in akitos voice)
no one ever says anything on these stupid *$$ endings its always something stupid whats wrong with the dude makin this??? yo hidan&kakuzu go &^$& yourself you stupid *$$ piece of $*!%!!!!

[hidan&kakuzu]

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