Hyuga family's fanfiction

heres how it goes one of the main branch people in the hyuga family named Kahn.went on a mission and never retuned and nobody could find him. butwhat happened was he fell in love w/a sand nin-named Hika.they married and had kids named Hero[he-Row] Nira[near-ah]but one day a boy named Shade showed up on their door step and adopted him now they return to leaf an eppy in a few minutes.hope you like it

hero:dad we there yet!
kahn:no,not yet.
hero:why are moving to leaf?
hika:because your father grew up there and evryone thinks hes dead.
kahn:nira your awffly quiet.whats wrong?
nira:huh?oh nothin.
shady fiure:*grabs jewles*
nira:stop thief!sha...
hero:*pulls out shadow shurikan* *then throws it*
thief:AHH!!*blod splatters on the ground w/body chopped in half*
Nira:couldin we just held him down.
Kahn:no.lets see his id.hmm...his name was Tashazie hamuna.*sigh* apety thief. 1day later at leaf. end eppy
sorry I know needs more action wil get some later on.
eppy commin up in a few.eppy #1

*door opens*
neji:whos there?
kahn:my name is Kahn this is my familyHero,nirda,Hika,and my adopted son Shade.
Hiashi:huh...*crying*is that you Kahn?
Kahn:yes. *after the whole explanation*
Hiashi:goodbye Kahn.
Kahn:goodbye.*the next day*
Kakashi:time to fight team.how should we arrange it Kahn?
Kahn:like this[naruto v.s.Shade][Saskue v.s. Hero] [Sakura v.s. Nira]
Kakashi:I like that.
Kahn:good.first fight Naruto v.s. shade Fight!!
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naruto:Shadow clone
Shade:heh.Rasengan+Shadow clone.
Sakura:thats what naruto would do. whats going on?
Kahn:Shade copys their moves and adaps there fighting style.
Naruto:*blood slithering down his right arm*I...Iam gonna become HOKAGE!This wont stop me
Shade:we'll see wont we.Shade Barrage(basicly naruto rendan) RA!!
Naruto:*summmons toad*(turns into kyubi form)Ra!!!
Kahn:he won.Naruto wins*drags Shade out*
Naruto:*faints*uhh...*blood spweews out of his mouth.

Next eppisode : Saskue v.s Hero:Byakugans secrets!!eppy #2

anybody like it yet please post about it.

[Kiomi]

on a scale from 17 to 9 17 lowest 9 highest

11/9

Originally Posted by Kiomi

on a scale from 17 to 9 17 lowest 9 highest

11/9

I know needs more actioin and fighting.will put more then .oh thanks for your oppinion.

Hero:lets go...I mean If your not scared.
Saskue:scared.Not at all.
Both:Sharingan / Byakugan!!
Hero:64 division stike!
Saskue:Shadow clone!!*surrounds Hero*Firestyle Dragon Fire!!
Hero:big mistake!Heavenly spin!!*blood flies out of saskue*division 64.kaiten!
Saskue:Secret Sharingan Attack!!*after he dodges*second time around!
Hero:*dodges* *gets cut bad*Smashes Saskue chakra till no more*
Saskue:*blood flies out of his mouth*then faints*
Hero:huh...good match
Sakura:i cant beat the byakugan!(in head) (out of head) Cha!! lets go!
Kahn: Fight!!
Nira:division 64!!
Sakura:faints
Kakashi:winner Nira!!!

[Hyuga Neji]

1000 A+


You should still ad more fighting

Originally Posted by Hyuga Neji

1000 A+


You should still ad more fighting

thanks, more fighting on the way.and how do you do that thing where you to click and drag the mouse to see it?

[Hinata]

100/100, but needs more fighting but i know your working on that!