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New chapter Friday.
P.S: Chapter 2 is up to those of you who don't know. |
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Nice chapters 10/10
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good stuff rock_lee i like the drama with zoe not showing up and a filler really makes this stuff real
its more than a tourney it actually feels like real manga tight stuff lee 10++++++++/10 |
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of coure im ur number one fan
i always send u PMs too check ur box in a min |
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I have a feeling that I'm going to get banned tonight.
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nooooooooo......lol, oh well, lol. its just....i despise orochimaru, lol. but yeah, its still great
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how so? better not. i gotta see whats going on in your next chapter
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Chapter 3: Where are you Zoe?
Date: 11/16/95
Time: 7:35 Weather conditions: Very windy. Low percipitation. Much Frost. * * * * * * As Hakaru was being carried out on a stretcher to recive medical attention, he turned to his side to look at Shofata, who was also being carried out on a stretcher. Hakaru won the match, yet he didn't even care. He...was happy. Even though he did not show it, he was glad he didn't kill Shofata. It was very strange how Hakaru spared her life. Shofata was knocked out cold. She may have stopped even breathing every once in a while. Hakaru intended on slaughtering her to begin with. Why he decided not to? Who knows, he may have done it out of pitty. Out of kindness, or respect. Maybe even out of love. Hakaru closed his eyes. Blood ran freely down his face. Meanwhile, outside of Konoha... "Hm hm hm hm hm hmm..." Laughed one ninja standing near the Leaf gates. "Tonight is the night...We avenge Lord Orochimaru!" Said another ninja. "Lord Maki shall be quite pleased, we've done everything that he's asked us to do." Another Sound ninja said. All three of these ninja were Sound ninja. Maki's entrusted heanchmen. They were dragging a huge wagon, filled with bombs, explosives, ect. "Going somewhere?" A voice asked from out of nowhere. "W-who are you? W...What d-do you want with us?" The three asked back. "Well, well. We can't have three goons running around ruining our little tournament now cane we?" The voice said, jumping from tree to tree. The three looked round them, trying to find the person talking to them. "Behind you..." The voice said as the mysterious ninja delivered a devestating kick to one of the Sound ninja's spine. Once the Sound ninja got back up to his feet, all three looked at the ninja. "Who the heck are you?!" They asked. "Your worst nightmare, Zoe." He said as he whipped out several kunai. "I'm late enough as it is...I have to end this quick!" Zoe said as he threw the kunai at the ninja. They easily dodged and ran at Zoe. Zoe started up a wind blade and sliced one of the Sound ninja's head off, and the arm of another one. He then gave the last one a swift kick in the face. "Alright..." Zoe said catching his breath. "I'm off." But before he could leave, all three ninja jumped back to their feet. "No...Way..." Zoe said as the three Sound ninja began regenerating. "Just like when we fought those Sound ninja a couple months ago." Zoe said in shock. (See Ultimate Ninja Gaiden Chapter 3 For details.) Back at the tournament... The time is currently: 7:40 "Alright! Ladies and Gentlemen! The match is set *cough* to begin in 10 min. If Zoe is not here by that time, he will be forfited and lose his first battle! *cough*" The crowd was buzzing around about Zoe...And not only him... "I'm here!" Shikyo shouted running thru the main entrance. "Shikyo!" Lil hashbrown said waving to her. "Yo, you can wait up here with the rest of us, or go in to the Luxury Box and watch from there." Shikyo decided to wait down in the hall with the rest of them. She set her stuff down and walked up to a vending machine to get some soda. Hayate walked into the center of the battle zone. "It is now time to start the match. *cough cough* Both fighters at this time enter the battle arena now. *cough* Vata walked in and the crowd went nuts! Many chanting, "Va-ta, Va-ta, Va-ta, Va-ta!" Hayate looked around. "Now for Zoe..." * * * * * * * To be continued... Next time-Chapter 4: The compitetion heats up! |
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awesome chapter.
10/10 |
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