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#11
09-12-2007, 04:25 PM
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Chapter 2: Hakaru's Secret!
Date: 11/16/95
Time: 7:05pm. Weather Conditions: Very Windy With A High percipitation rate of Snow. * * * * * * * "Alright then..." Hayate said. "This match is only between Hakaru and Shofata...*cough*...Any objections?" "No." Shofata said. "None at all." "Hakaru?" Hayate asked. "Nope." Hakaru said. "Well then, I guess without further delay, let the first round battle between Hakaru and Shofat...*cough*...Begin!" Hayate shouted as he extended his arm between both contestants. "Let's get this stupid thing over with..." Shofata groaned as she whipped up a Pebble Rasengan. Hakaru did not even budge, for this is a new jutsu that even he doesn't know. Many many rocks and stones gathered in the palm of Shofata's right hand. Her chakra was swirling the rocks around. It (The chakra) was so intense, it was visible. Red Chakra. Hakaru very calmly made several handsigns. "It's too late for that...I refuse to be beaten by any man ever again." Shofata said as she ran straight for Hakaru. Hakaru didn't have any time to move, and before he could leap out of the way, before he could even blink, Shofata appeared in front of him. "Pebble Rasengan!" She shouted as the rocks shot out and slamed Hakaru's stomach at the speed of light. The chakra also attacked Hakaru, sending him flying in spirals in to a tree. The crowd looked astonished. Nobody can beat Hakaru that fast. After all, it was him (And Scar) who slaughtered Orochimaru. Shofata knew something was going on. She just didn't know exactly what. "Behind you..." A voice said from behind her. She turned around, but saw nothing. And as she had her back turned, Hakaru appeared in front of her and started attacking her with a series of punches and kicks. Hakaru threw a straight fist in her direction. It connected. He then swipped his leg and hit her calfs with his thigh, knocking her back. Hakaru kneed her in the back, causing blood to splatter out of her mouth. After that, Hakaru grabbed her by the neck. "It's over...In about 10 seconds, I'll snap your neck." Shofata felt her tears run down her cheeks. She remembered her father doing the exact same thing to her. She remembered how she used to get beat within an inch of her life every single day by her father. To make matters even worse, it was for no reason at all. One day, her father killed her mother right before her very eyes. Her father ripped her mother's heart out. And engulfed it. He ate it. Shofata was scared. She was afraid to die, and she knew that Hakaru was going to kill her. But even more then her body, her pride hurt. She made a vow the day she ran away from home. A vow she had intended to keep. She was to never lose to a man ever again. "Hey...kid." Hakaru whispered in to Shofata's ear. Hakaru's grip felt easier now. "Y...Y-yes?" She asked, still crying. "I...I'll spare your life...Under one condition." He said. "W-What is...it?" "This our little secret. My secret. If you tell anybody that I'm doing this...I will kill you." Hakaru said, glancing deep in to Shofata's eyes. "I promise!" She said as Hakaru tossed her across the arena. Hakaru turned to the judge. "This match is over." He said. Hakaru began to walk away. He kept on walking untill he was knocked really hard on his neck. He fell to the ground. Shofata stood before him, very bloodied and bruised. "I...I will win for my mother!" She said as she continued to kick the living crap out of Hakaru. Hayate looked scared. He never thought that a tournament could be so bloody. As Shofata continued to rapidly kick Hakaru while he was down, The Kage were having a discussion about the match...And so were the other fighters! Not to mention all the fans. There was not a single audience member sitting down. They were all standing on the tip mof their toes, drawn in to the match. Hakaru puked several times. He was nearly dead. Shofata used her jutsu to see Hakaru's nerves, and she bruised his spinal collum. So since Hakaru could not use jutsu, he was completly beaten. Shofata was sure to kick him to death. Shofata gathered all of her chakra in to her right foot, and raised it up high. "This is it!" She shouted as she brought her foot down. SLAP! Hakaru grabbed Shofata's foot. He threw it, and Shofata fell to the ground. Hakaru struggled to get to his feet. But he managed to stand up. Shofata leaped back up and ran at Hakaru. Hakaru reached out and busted Shofata in her bottom lip, and also knocked out her bottom teeth. Hakaru once again grabbed her neck, byt this time around, he was going to snap it. GOING to. But insted, he choked her untill she was out cold, and threw her to the floor. Hayate walked up to Hakaru and raised his arm up high. "The winner is...Hakaru!" He announced as 175,000 fans burst in to cheers. Hakaru collapsed to the floor.... * * * * * To be continued... Next time: Chapter 3: Where are you Zoe? 
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#12
09-12-2007, 04:38 PM
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A very nice chapter as always, yay Haraku won lol. 10/10. Much suspence is in this story, I like that. Epic Win!
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#14
09-13-2007, 12:24 PM
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loved it!!! 10-10..... good length to the fight too!
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#16
09-13-2007, 01:28 PM
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alright i finally found the time to read them all. and they were all great!
 lol. i agree with SOD. Great suspense. but i have a question. did you make Maki a otokage? i was kinda confused on that one part in the 1st chapter.
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#17
09-13-2007, 01:50 PM
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09-13-2007, 02:22 PM
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09-13-2007, 03:03 PM
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09-13-2007, 03:12 PM
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 A kid version.
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