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Old 02-05-2007, 09:10 PM
Rival Rival is offline
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Naruto Gaiden

Naruto Gaiden (Side-Story) is an Alternate Universe based around Naruto.
Here is a sample script of what we are looking for:

Name:
Kage:
Theme:
Clans: (Bloodline Limits / Please only post two for now)
Economy: How it makes its money (farming, mining, missions, etc..)
Structure: Is it located in the mountains, sea, sand, etc.
Location: This will coincide with its structure and location on the map.
Ideals: What this country believes in. Does it attack weaker countries? Or try and build a relationship.

So far we have;

Name: (Hidden in Forge)
Kage: Kinzokukage (?)
Theme: Fire/Metal
Clans: Kinnoku Family: "Cool Molding" Allows user to shape metal object even though they aren't heated to melting temperatures.
Economy: Makes money off of mining and refining metals. Imports foodstuff heavily. Also does missions.
Structure: Located on and in a mountain. Has mines on the outskirts as well.
Location: Probably in a mountain range.
Ideals: It prefers to keep to itself and hates relying on others for things (like the foodstuffs). But since they rely so much on imports they are forced to guard their trade routes which hampers their mission revenue. Also their own metal exports are targeted by bandits.

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Name: Ryuken (Dragon heart) "Hidden Dragon Heart Village"
Kage: Ryukage
Theme: Ether
Ether is the general name for a class of chemical compounds which contain an ether group.
In ancient and medieval philosophy, the fifth and highest essence after the four elements of earth, air, fire, and water, thought to be the substance of the heavenly bodies and latent in all things.
*Dragon hearts were believed to be made of Ether, fire for their breath/courage, wind for their flight/wisdom, water for their treasure/pride, and earth for their strength/will.....just in case you were wondering why I chose Dragon Heart as the name."

Clans:

[Ryuugu] -Palace of the Dragon King
Bloodline Limit: Shotenryu (Shape-Shifting Dragon)
The ninja is able to sprout dragon-like wings, thus giving him the ability to fly. Their wings absorb the surrounding ether and enable them to use them as an offensive tool as well as a defensive one as well.

[Kuryute] - House of the Dragon Hand
Bloodline Limit: Konryugan (Spirit Dragon Eye)
The ninja’s eyes turn pitch black, the only visible part of their eyes is a small red slit for a pupil. Their eyes focus the surrounding ether and then project it back onto the area or opponent ninja. If projected onto the area, the ninja is able to create a very strong, active Genjutsu that changes accordingly to enemy actions. If projected onto the enemy itself, the user is able to decipher enemy actions moments before execution.


Economy: The Ryuu are very self-sufficient. They deal in various types of agriculture, and are able to refine various types of minerals and gems do to their latent abilities involving Ether.
Structure: The village is broken into three parts. One for the Ryuugu Clan, the other for the Kuryute, and the central building for court dealings and markets.
Location: High-altitudes, likely on a mountain top or range.
Ideals: They are very proud people, often never asking for others aid. Although their pride does not cloud their judgment when coming to the aid of another.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...rutoDragon.jpg

Naruto using Konryugan and wearing the Ryuken Forehead Protector!

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Name: the village hidden in the light
Kage: tensaikage
Theme: sun/light/heat/genjutsu
the villages is protected by a light based technique and genjutsu that makes the village unseeable through the eyes of passers by during the day

Clans: only have 1 for the moment
Tenpi clan: can direct sun light to use powerfull light jutsus...Joukeigan the user gains the ability to pierce through darkness to find any source of light and can locate people through the heat radiating off of their bodies when joukeigan is activated the pupils enlarge and turn orange and are surrounded by small orange lines together looking like a sun and sun rays and the rest of the eye turns grey

Economy: it generates a steady income through missions and also sends squads of ninjas to neighbouring villages to help with construction and defense
Structure: in an open plain surrounded by woodland that has many other open plains
Location: [url]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v378/ahoyt/Map-1.jpg[/url]
some where down the bottom more adsact details later teh village is also located near a large cliff face
Ideals: the village is semi peacefull with only one real enemy/rival village is helpfull to neighbouring towns villages etc

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Current World Map:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v378/ahoyt/Map-1.jpg

Last edited by Rival : 02-06-2007 at 12:15 AM.
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Old 02-05-2007, 09:43 PM
Sky_Crawler Sky_Crawler is offline
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Heres the Metal Village, It's missing stuff here and there, I'll fill them up when I figure out what to put there, if you got any suggestions please speak up!

Name: (Hidden in Forge)
Kage: Kinzokukage (?)
Theme[/b]: Fire/Metal
Clans: Kinnoku Family: "Cool Molding" Allows user to shape metal object even though they aren't heated to melting temperatures.
Economy: Makes money off of mining and refining metals. Imports foodstuff heavily. Also does missions.
Structure: Located on and in a mountain. Has mines on the outskirts as well.
Location: Probably in a mountain range.
Ideals: It prefers to keep to itself and hates relying on others for things (like the foodstuffs). But since they rely so much on imports they are forced to guard their trade routes which hampers their mission revenue. Also their own metal exports are targeted by bandits.
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Old 02-05-2007, 10:10 PM
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Name: Ryuken (Dragon heart) "Hidden Dragon Heart Village"
Kage: Ryukage
Theme: Ether
Ether is the general name for a class of chemical compounds which contain an ether group.
In ancient and medieval philosophy, the fifth and highest essence after the four elements of earth, air, fire, and water, thought to be the substance of the heavenly bodies and latent in all things.
*Dragon hearts were believed to be made of Ether, fire for their breath/courage, wind for their flight/wisdom, water for their treasure/pride, and earth for their strength/will.....just in case you were wondering why I chose Dragon Heart as the name."

Clans:

[Ryuugu] -Palace of the Dragon King
Bloodline Limit: Shotenryu (Shape-Shifting Dragon)
The ninja is able to sprout dragon-like wings, thus giving him the ability to fly. Their wings absorb the surrounding ether and enable them to use them as an offensive tool as well as a defensive one as well.

[Kuryute] - House of the Dragon Hand
Bloodline Limit: Konryugan (Spirit Dragon Eye)
The ninja’s eyes turn pitch black, the only visible part of their eyes is a small red slit for a pupil. Their eyes focus the surrounding ether and then project it back onto the area or opponent ninja. If projected onto the area, the ninja is able to create a very strong, active Genjutsu that changes accordingly to enemy actions. If projected onto the enemy itself, the user is able to decipher enemy actions moments before execution.


Economy: The Ryuu are very self-sufficient. They deal in various types of agriculture, and are able to refine various types of minerals and gems do to their latent abilities involving Ether.
Structure: The village is broken into three parts. One for the Ryuugu Clan, the other for the Kuryute, and the central building for court dealings and markets.
Location: High-altitudes, likely on a mountain top or range.
Ideals: They are very proud people, often never asking for others aid. Although their pride does not cloud their judgment when coming to the aid of another.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...rutoDragon.jpg

Naruto using Konryugan and wearing the Ryuken Forehead Protector!

Last edited by Rival : 02-05-2007 at 10:19 PM.
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Old 02-05-2007, 10:11 PM
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Here's the new map. We will be using this for now. If need be we will create a second map to add on if we should get more villages.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v378/ahoyt/Map-1.jpg
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Old 02-05-2007, 10:28 PM
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Just a question, are the Ryuken aggressive and try to expand or just maintain what they have and keep to themselves? Or perhaps they believe they are the highest order and send high level ninjas to control events within the other villages to maintain their order. Doing so would open up possible story arcs.
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Old 02-05-2007, 10:29 PM
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Name: the village hidden in the light
Kage: tensaikage
Theme: sun/light/heat/genjutsu
the villages is protected by a light based technique and genjutsu that makes the village unseeable through the eyes of passers by during the day

Clans: only have 1 for the moment
Tenpi clan: can direct sun light to use powerfull light jutsus...Joukeigan the user gains the ability to pierce through darkness to find any source of light and can locate people through the heat radiating off of their bodies when joukeigan is activated the pupils enlarge and turn orange and are surrounded by small orange lines together looking like a sun and sun rays and the rest of the eye turns grey

Economy: it generates a steady income through missions and also sends squads of ninjas to neighbouring villages to help with construction and defense
Structure: in an open plain surrounded by woodland that has many other open plains
Location: [url]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v378/ahoyt/Map-1.jpg[/url]
some where down the bottom more adsact details later teh village is also located near a large cliff face
Ideals: the village is semi peacefull with only one real enemy/rival village is helpfull to neighbouring towns villages etc

ill make another clan soonish

Last edited by blazinfire0 : 02-05-2007 at 10:53 PM.
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Old 02-05-2007, 11:07 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Sky_Crawler
Just a question, are the Ryuken aggressive and try to expand or just maintain what they have and keep to themselves? Or perhaps they believe they are the highest order and send high level ninjas to control events within the other villages to maintain their order. Doing so would open up possible story arcs.
Indeed, as stated they are very prideful and believe themselves to be the pinnacle of success, thus they "help" other villages realize their own weakness and "protect" them.
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Old 02-05-2007, 11:15 PM
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Cool, I got a great idea for a lengthy story.
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Old 02-05-2007, 11:20 PM
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pm it to us if you dont want to give it away
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Old 02-05-2007, 11:22 PM
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Its only a sentence long idea, it can't be fleshed out until we solidify this universe a bit more. Long ways to go before a story can come out of it. I'll reveal it when we start discussing the story stuff, its best not to get ahead of ourselves just yet.
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