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02-04-2007, 06:45 PM
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Hate...
HATE... I glared at his red eyes, which had the form of the tomoe seal; Mangekyo Sharingan. My eyes were also red, but instead mine had three tomoe. I gritted my teeth in anger and pointed at him. "HATED BROTHER!" I yelled at him. "I have finally found you! And now, I'm going to kill you!" He walked closer to me. His footsteps made tracks in the muddy ground beneath him. His long, dark cloak bearing red clouds blew in the cold night wind. He was inches from me when he stared back. "Foolish brother. Do you honestly think you can defeat me?" He mocked. "I have sacrificed everything! EVERYTHING! Just to become a monster!" ".....Then come, if you think you can win....." "I don't think! I know!" I pulled out my katana and charged at my brother. I attempted to stab him in the heart, but he easily pushed my blade aside. He then punched me in my exposed back, sending me falling to the ground. "Is that all you're capable of, little brother?" To his surprise, I disappeared in a puff of smoke. In my place was a wooden log! "Substitution Jutsu! Argh... Where did he go?!" He soon got an answer, when I came falling from the sky at him with my leg outstretched. He caught my foot, and threw me to the side. I skidded on the ground before regaining my balance. I quickly made hand seals and put my hand up to my mouth. "Fire Style! Fire Ball Jutsu!" A mighty blaze emerged from my mouth, heading straight at my opponent. There was an explosion, sending debris everywhere. The fire soon died out, revealing that he was gone! In an instant, he reappeared in front of me. He grabbed on to my shoulders, not allowing me to move. I struggled. but he wouldn't let go. It was like he was staring into my soul, instead of me. Suddenly, every inch of my body was in pain. He released his grip on me, allowing me to fall to the ground. I screamed in pain, and the sound of flapping wings filled the air as birds fled from the loud disturbance. "The Mangekyo Sharingan can cast a Genjutsu that puts the target in extreme pain." He explained. He then raised his foot and stomped my face into the dirt. "I should have killed you a long time ago, brother. A mistake I will now correct!" He pulled out a kunai from his cloak. A tear rolled down my face as I thought about the Uchiha Massacre. Why? I thought. Why am I so... weak? I couldn't avenge my clan then, and I can't now. I felt a burning sensation in my neck. The felling spread throughout my entire body. NO! I will kill Itachi! Here and now! I have given up too much to quit! I rose up suddenly, throwing Itachi off of me and to the ground. I looked at my hands. They were covered in black markings, along with my legs and feet. I turned to face my brother. I had a blood lust like I've never had before. "What... What is this Chakra?!" Itachi questioned. He got to his feet and went into a fighting stance. Ignoring his question, I charged at him going so fast that not even his Sharingan could read my movements. I faked a punch and instead kneed him in the gut. He coughed up blood as I slammed his back to the ground. He began to get up, but I kicked him in the stomach again, making him fall back down. I grabbed the collar of his cloak and flipped him around so I could look at his face as I killed him. "This is it, Itachi! I'm going to kill you!" I held out my right hand. In a flash, it was surrounded by crackling electricity. I took one last look at my older brother. I could see the despair in his eyes. "THIS IS THE END!" I shouted as I thrust the Chidori into his stomach. His blood splashed up in my face and I just smiled. I pulled my hand out of the wound and shook off the red liquid. Where my hand once was there was now nothing except a pool of blood in Itachi. I had done it. I had avenged my clan. I turned around to walk away when... "Heh heh he..." Itachi laughed weakly. "Ha ha ha!" I turned around and looked at him in confusion. He was on the brink of death and he was laughing!? "What the hell is so funny!?!?" "Foolish... little brother..." He said in a voice just a little louder than a whisper. "Don't... you understand? From the start... you have played right... into my game! Think about it... Because of me.... you have... betrayed alliences..." Konoha... "Thrown away... what you could have had..." Sakura Haruno.... "And... destroyed precious friendships...." Naruto Uzumaki... "It is not you... who have won... it is I... I have made your life... a living hell!" His eyes slowly closed as he passed away. I just stood there, shaken and wide eyed. He was absolutely right. THE END Last edited by Naruto Is The Best : 02-05-2007 at 09:38 AM. 
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02-04-2007, 06:48 PM
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Wow. That's gold! 9.5/10!
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02-04-2007, 06:54 PM
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02-04-2007, 06:55 PM
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02-04-2007, 06:58 PM
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02-05-2007, 03:22 AM
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Wow, that was GREAT Nitb! Great twist. Aaah! I loves it! XD
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02-05-2007, 05:47 AM
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Heh heh... Even in Death, Itachi Pwns Sasuke.
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02-05-2007, 08:43 AM
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Thanks for the reviews.
 My body demands that I write a fanfic every day. I have all these ideas floating in my head, but don't know how to get them out. Music is a big inspiration. Wow, I kind of rambled there. xD Last edited by Naruto Is The Best : 02-05-2007 at 09:39 AM.
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02-05-2007, 09:35 AM
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