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Naruto: A New Way to Ninja!
Chapter 1: A New Way to Ninja! Kakashi: Ok team, today i will show you an assassination jutsu like none you've ever seen...... The Jonin have to teach it to their students because of the current war. Naruto: YES!! I WILL LEARN THIS JUTSU BELIVE!!! Sakura: Shut up and let him teach Naruto! Sasuke: Yeah loser! Kakashi: Now that you've all achieved Jonin rank, you should have the skill to perfect this jutsu over time... Naruto: ARE YOU GANNA TEACH IT TO US!?? Kakashi: Patience! Ok first relax and let your chakra flow freely. The three jonin relaxed, focusing their chakra. Kakashi: Next fosu your chakra to these places, heart, lungs, and feet. The three jonin di as they were told, and dissapeared! Naruto: Hey where's Sasuke?! Sasuke: right here! Kakashi: you are invisible... Sakura: what is this jutsu called? Kakashi: Art of the invisible warrior! I nicknamed it... The New Way to Ninja! next time: Chapter 2: The Jutsu of invicibility! |
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So sort of like Kabuto's jutsu?
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hmm i liked it but it was a little sort but still not bad 9.7/10
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Yeah sorta, and next chap will be longer, i will post it tommorow.
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I'll keep reading for now though. ![]() Oh, and please take a look at my Fan Fic, I am always looking for people's opinions on it. [url]http://www.bandaicg.com/naruto/showthread.php?t=18807[/url] It's called Naruto: Way of the Ninja... >.> Last edited by Fourth Hokage : 02-02-2007 at 11:44 PM. |
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I like it. 9/10.Its a little short but I say its a really good start ^_^
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Can we just pretend Sasuke learned all that from orochi...... but came back to be Jonin! Please!!
Anyway new chapter in an hour or so. |
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Last edited by Fourth Hokage : 02-03-2007 at 10:45 PM. |
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i know, and i will try to go for more detail on next chapter.
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