Konoha: Rise of the Dragon

[Kunugi]

I took this character partially from my book that i am writing and partially from what my friend and I were creating at one point or another. If i get his consent i will post the character he was also working on. Also if I get enough posts that people would like me to make this i will add 2 or 3 of my other original characters

Character Creation

Name: Kunugi Kyoichi
Age: 7 at the beginning.
Gender: Male
Rank: Unknown
Village: Unknown
Appearance: A fit male about 5'10" in height, With semi spiked long black hair, that flows down his back in a black ponytain. His eyes are a blood-red hue. A majority of the time he wears a black hooded cloak with a Symbol Death on the back of it stained in blood. When he isn't wearing the cloak he is wearing a black cargo pants or shorts, with a black tank top and a chain mail vest under it.

Clan: Kyoichi

Bloodline Limit: Ryugan- Dragons eye. LIke the Sharingan it had several levels. Specializing in elemental dragon techniques and, dragon summonings. eventually leading to the dragons eye. Techniques from that form are yet undiscovered. There are multiple elements of this Bloodline limit, Kunugi Has the Hi Ryugan specializing in mostly Fire Dragon Techiniques. The strongest version of the Ryugan is the Omni Ryugan combining the talents of all the Elements.
*Something that i forgot to mention but am putting in here is the Dragon mark on his chest. Many of the others from his village have this mark. It isn't a bloodline limit and it's not a demon that is sealed inside him.*

Techniques i Will pull from the List i have in my writing folder which i don't have with me. I'll put descriptions later. More Techniques will be added Later
Justus:
Kage Bushin - Shadow Clone Jutsu
Fireball Jutsu - Same as Fireball Jutsu that Sasuke uses during the survival training with Kakashi at the beginning of the series.
Pheonix Fire Jutsu - Same as Pheonix Fire Jutsu that Sasuke uses in the Forest of Death during the Chunnin Exams
Dragon Flame Jutsu - Same as Dragon Flame Jutsu that Sasuke uses in the Forest of Death during the Chunnin Exams
Raging Fire Blast - A Vastly Superior version to the Fireball Jutsu
Hi bushin Justu - Similar to Kage bushin jutsu only the clones burn when touched and instead of dissapearing as puffs of Smoke they explode.
Summoning Jutsu: Hi Ryu - Summons one of the eight lvls of Fire Dragons to Fight for alongside him.
Dragon's Secret Summoning Jutsu: Hi Ryu, Salamander - Summons a man in Flaming Dragon Armor. The summon is permanate and ends only when Salamander Dies.
*Gin ***o Ito - Roughly traslates to Silver Spider Thread, An attack that causes silver wires to appear and can be controlled with ones chackra. This was taken from my book and will be used in one of the first few chapters.*
Enkai - I believe Roughly translates to Ties of Destruction, it's the hilt to the sword of his clan. Kunugi won't get this until later. You will find out why in either chapter 1 or chapter 2.

Weapons: Kunai, Shurikens, and a Katana and Short Sword, and a hilt to the sword of his clan.

Goal: To protect his new home and family from the tragedies that have befallen his past.

Background: One of only a handful of survivors of his village that was destroyed by warlord that was bent on power. His village was destroyed when it was stumbled upon by the warlord and ordered to be eradicated. The village was attacked during a feast. Kunugi's parents and 3 brothers were killed in the destruction of his village. Kunugi and the survivors of the village made there way to Konoha. This happened when Kunugi was 7. He joined the Academy when he was 8 and graduated 2 years later.

Personality: Genius Tactitian, and Deadly beyond belief. Strong and fast, keeps to himself despite the fact that many have tried to open up to him. Some would say he is cold when all he's done is put up a barrier. If his barrier goes down he will protect u with his own life.

Timeline: This fanic takes place as though Naruto is the Hokage. I might write in Sasuke at some point. Naruto Married Hinata in this fanfic. I'll bring up several other characters from the series as well. Most the Naruto genin are in there early 30's.

Please tell me if you would like me to continue if I get four or five posts telling me to move forward with this, I'll post the first chapter, which will be about his past.

Chapter One: Fire In The Mountains,
The Hidden Village Falls

*EDIT* Anything that was edited in my first post will have * at the beginning and the end like so. *example*

[TheLegendarySucker]

I think its a good idea! Write it!

[Kunugi]

Just from that i think i will write it. Even if ur the only person who reads it. I am hoping more ppl will comment and say it's a good idea but i will start writing chapter one for now.

[Shinobi_Guyver]

You do have a good leading character, I just have one complaint (and JDragons knows this one): Why does everybody's kekkei genkai involve the eyes!??! It's getting a bit overused.

[Kunugi]

When i was thinking about this it was based off a character that i had already partially made. I created the kekkei genkai more along the lines of when i had first seen part of the chunnin exams in the anime for the first time. I've been working on a couple other ones, but those would have to be taken from my book and i probably should. I'm will probably change his kekkei genkai to what i do have in my book which wouldn't be a kekkei genkai. But i'll probably have one of my other original characters at least have it.

[Lil Hinata]

I thought the character was very well done.I think you should write it and I will be sure to read it.And I thought the kekkei Genkai was very cool lol I think you should keep that one

[Kunugi]

Ok i'll be typing the prologue and might post it tonight b4 i go to sleep hopefully. After the Prologue will be chapter one. After Chapter 2 there will a short side story. I'll type the rest as it comes up.

*Edit*
I will be adding more character bios. Probably one or 2 after the prologue and then maybe another 1 or 2 after chapter 1. After that i will provide Character Bios as new OC's come into play.

[Kunugi]

Ok here is the prologue i want to see what you guys think. Give me some critisism and though there wasn't alot of action in the prologue. Read the title to Chapter 1. The **** is going to hit the fan.

Prologue to Chapter 1

Some where in the a semi distant region on a mountain. A warlords army is working its way on a warpath to expand. Employing a small army of ninjas to accompany them and search the area. A village is hidden in the dense forest. The village is found at a time of peace, though it knew of the war that raged in close proximity to there borders. Being watched by the ninjas in employ of the rampaging warlord. The warlord give the order to surround the village and wait for an order to attack.
In the village a 7 year old boy plays with 3 elder brothers. A young girl the same age runs up to the group of siblings.
“Kunugi your father told me to come and get u. we are supposed to go up to the temple with my grandfather for training.” the young girl was pulling on his shirt and the boys stopped playing.
“Well Kunugi if thats what dad wants you shouldn't keep Master Kensen waiting don't you think. Daisuke, Keisuke since Kunugi has to go up to see the master today, I'll train you guys in some swordsmanship.” The eldest brother mentioned as he ran to a rack containing hard wood training swords. Kunugi ran off with with the young girl up the mountain path. After an hour a young looking man arrived in the village.
The man looked to be in his early 20's when in fact his age was later 30's. His eyes were a dark blue, deep like the sea. Some who stared in them long enough swear they lost themselves as though they were in the ocean. His hair was black in a long ponytail flowing down his back. The front of his hair cut short and spiked. Daisuke and Keisuke were splitting images of this man.
“Tsukasa, I see you've been teaching your brothers something of the way of the sword. Why not something more along with our regular training with kunai and shuriken.” He walked past the boys picking up one of the wooden swords.
“I thought it would be a decent change of pace father. This way they have a chance to learn new ways to fight and counter new weapons. Besides one of us will inherit the clan from you one day father. We should all be prepared to defend the village.”
“Well then carry on. I'm gonna check on your mother. Don't hurt each other playing around boys.” The clan leader said throwing the wooden sword to the youngest of the three there Daisuke. The clan leader walked into the largest of the houses in the village.



The Prologue is Kinda short i know. But now I'll start writing
Chapter 1: Fire in the mountains,
The Hidden Village Falls

Kunugi's Father: Everyone gather your weapons. We must defend the village. Daisuke, Keisuke, gather all the women children and young girls. Also gather the men to young to fight. Once done flee to the mountain pass. Tsukasa, go to the house and get me my sword. We are going to fight. TO ARMS MY BROTHERS AND SISTERS

***On The Mountain Pass***

Master Kensen: Kunugi I told you to stay at the house.

Kunugi: Gin...***o...Ito...

Hope you like it. Plz review. I'll post the 1st chapter sometime tomorrow.

[Lil Hinata]

Well a little confusein only cause you need to space it you more.But it was a pertty good start.I think you should continue.8/10

[Kunugi]

I'll redo the spacing for later chapters. I was just posting the prologue in regular format. Also check the first post on the thread u'll notice that i edited and added some stuff to it.