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View Poll Results: what do ya think?(itll get better along the way)
Mexico! 1 8.33%
I like eggs 3 25.00%
Its great keep goin 3 25.00%
eh its okay 2 16.67%
no yu stink i hate you plz stop making these or ill leave this site forever 2 16.67%
its bad stop making it 0 0%
ive seen better but keep going anyway and ill think about it 0 0%
awesome OMG this is the greatest fanfic ever make more of these or ill die 1 8.33%
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Old 03-30-2006, 08:54 AM
crimson sharingan crimson sharingan is offline
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Ninja of the shadow village part 2; sasuke and sakura you're next!

Dae eiza(Dawh-AY-ZUH): Well it seem this kid has friends.... I suppose i can take them out too in a good few seconds

Sasuke: RAAAAGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*charges at Dae Eiza with kunai*

kchunk!
*Eiza holds the kunai and tosses it 30 miles away*

Sasuke: I expected that!
*takes a demond wind shuriken out of his backpack and throws it*

Dae Eiza: hmph!
*moves the the left and the shuriken misses*

Dae Eiza: That was so weak!
*hand signs*

Dae Eiza: Shadow beast jutsu!
*a giant shadow monster comes at Sasuke*

Sasuke: Sharingan!
*copies hand signs*

Sasuke: Shadow Beast Jutsu!

Dae Eiza: Nice bloodline limit.......now meet mine! Chaos sharingan!
*one eye sees and copies sasukes sharingan copying his beast and he makes a new shadow beast but this time its more powerful and evil*

Sasuke: WHAT?!?! Theres another sharingan?!?!

Dae Eiza: Yes, its known as the chaos sharingan. Though I am not a part of the Uchiha clan I somehow have this keke genkai ......along with my other 10 bloodline traits!!!!!!!!!!

Sakura: Is he s-saying........that hes got ten more?!?!?

Dae Eiza: That's right hehehe.....Now my shadow beasts attack!

Sakura: AGGGGGHHHH!!!!!!
*dies*

Sasuke: Don't even think about using the sharingan against me and getting away with it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!RAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!Lightning edge jutsu!!!!!!!!!!!!
*a big ball of destructive lightning gathers in sasukes hand and he runs towards Dae Eiza*

Dae Eiza: Is that your best jutsu?
*blocks it with his hands and doesn't get a scratch*

Sasuke: HUH?!

Dae Eiza: This is pathetic. Chaos sharingan! Chaos Lightning Edge jutsu!!!!!

Sasuke:!!!!!!!!!!

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMM!!!!!! !!!!!!
*theres a huge explosion*

Sasuke: AAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGGGHHHHKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dae Eiza: After everything you've been through you still can't take the damage of a chaos chidori?

Sasuke: I'm...............going...............to kill youuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*does 20 hands signs*

Dae eiza: What are you-

Sasuke: Secret jutsu! Chidori Kage Bunshin!
*a bunch of lightning edge jutsus appear in his hands and he puts them all together to make a gigantic lighting edge jutsu*

Dae eiza: He can still...

Sasuke: DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
*picks up gigantic chidori above his head and throws it at Dae Eiza*

Dae Eiza: I'm sorry to rain on your parade but I'm not going anywhere!!!!!Secret Jutsu! Shadow Kage spirit summoning technique!
*A dark being's spirit that is stronger than the great hokage goes into Eiza's body and Dae Eiza turns completely black, like a shadow and he punches the gigantic chidori*

Sasuke: GRRRRRRRRRRR ILL STILL WINNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dae Eiza: RRRRR RAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
*his punch makes the chidori explosde and he shoots out of the smoke*

Dae eiza: HAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sectret Jutsu! Shadow destruction jutsu!
*a giant black ball of chakra and dark power is in Eiza's hand and he hits sasuke with it*

Sasuke: AAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHH HHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !Ughhnnn.......................................... ............you.....................suck.......... ..................
*dies*
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Old 03-31-2006, 09:49 PM
Neji+Chouji Neji+Chouji is offline
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is his kekei genkei to copy other kekei genkei's if it is Tomu has the same power.......
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Old 03-31-2006, 10:15 PM
crimson sharingan crimson sharingan is offline
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Neji+Chouji
is his kekei genkei to copy other kekei genkei's if it is Tomu has the same power.......
no its to copy ANY other kind of jutsu including kekegenkai and instead of an exact copy chaos sharingan turns the jutsu more powerful and evil
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Old 04-01-2006, 08:09 PM
crimson sharingan crimson sharingan is offline
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The ninja of the shadow village eppy 3; konohomaru you brat!

Note; all of these eppies have taken place where naruto has become an 18 year old jonin and konohomaru is 12

Konohamaru(sees dead naruto): Boss!
*runs over to him*

Konohomaru: Hey you killed him! You killed him didn't you ya big bully!

Dae Eiza: What are you going to do about it shrimp?

Konohomaru: Why you...I'm going to kill you and become the next hokage!
*leaps in the air over Dae eiza and tries to dive down but Dae Eiza holds Konohomaru and throws him to the ground*

Konohomaru: AGGGHH!!!!!

Dae eiza: This is pointless

Konohomaru: RRRRRRRR!!!!!
*hand signs; tiger, boar, ox, rat, rooster, dragon, monkey*

Konohomaru: Fire style Pheonix flame jutsu!
*breathes out flames that are in the shape of a pheonix*

Dae Eiza: this kid's improved...Chaos sharingan!
*hand signs; tiger, boar, ox, rat, rooster, dragon, monkey and he breathes a dark fire pheonix that tears through konohomaru's jutsu*

Konohomaru: uh-oh! Saru Tatsu Ushi I Ne Tora U Tori! Lightning bomb jutsu!
*a small glimmer of light gathers in his hand and he throws it but before he does dae eiza stares at him with one eye*

Dae Eiza: Chaos Sharingan! Saru Tatsu Ushi I Ne Tora U Tori! Shadow Lightning bomb jutsu!
*the bomb and when it explodes from crashing into konohomaru's lightning bomb tons of shadow lightning energy pour out*

Konohomaru: Take this!
*chucks a shuriken at Dae eiza but Eiza catches it in his teeh and spits it back at lightspeed*

Dae Eiza: .............
*Kicks Konohomaru in the face*

Konohomaru: AAAAAAAAAKK!!!!

Dae Eiza: This is too easy!!!!
*punches Konohomaru in the stomach*

Konohomaru: AAAAAKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!unnghhhh...........Grrrrrr.... ...
*gets up*

Dae Eiza: HAA!!!
*kicks Konohomaru to the side*

Konohomaru: ...........

Dae Eiza: I believe in your village theres a saying; can't take the heat stay out of the kitchen

Konohomaru: here's another one.....ugh.......your mom......

Dae Eiza: WHY YOU INSOLENT LITTLE-
*Punches Konohomaru straight through 4 houses*

Konohomaru: (cough) i hate you...

Dae Eiza: Not dead yet huh?! You got guts, kid!
*shoots out some sort of shadow chakra blast from his hand*

Konohomaru: H-How did you do that?

Dae Eiza: Oh its just a little tactic the shadow village has. We've discovered a secret power; Kaijutsu. Its a special kind of jutsu. well I shouldn't say jutsu becuas its actually just releasing chakra instead of actually taking the time to turn it into a jutsu. So things like the basic sharingan wont work.

Konohomaru: Kaijutsu, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, gimme any jutsu and ill take you on!

Dae eiza: hmph.
*fires a long sharp elongated cone shapedark chakra out of his hand*

Konohomaru: Ughk!
*He gets hit in the shoulder*

Dae eiza: heh.......You brat you honestly think you can beat me?

Konohomaru: BRAT?!?!?!?!

Dae Eiza: Yeah thats right. And your "boss" was pathetic too! He never taught anyone anything! He was a loser! Even you learned nothing from him!

Konohomaru: RRRRRRAAAAAGGGGGHHH!!!!!!!!!!!WELL HERES SOMETHING TO PROVE YOU WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR......................RASENGA AAAANNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Hits Dae Eiza Directly in the chest and theres a huge explosion of chakra*

BOOOOMMMM!!!!!!!!!

WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!

Konohomaru(on the ground): No way...
*Eiza isnt damaged at all and the only thing that rasengan did to him was tear some of his shirt*

Dae Eiza: Hehehehehehehehehbehe..........yes way...............now im going to end your meaningless pathetic life!
*Eiza picks up Konohomaru but before Eiza can do anything Konohomaru takes a sharp tiny toothpick size needle and launches it deep into Eizas soulder*

Dae Eiza: Hey!
*pulls out the needle and then slits konohomaru's throat with his claw*

Dae Eiza: Worthless piece of flesh...
*tosses Konohomaru's corpse to the ground*
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