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Old 02-04-2008, 10:58 AM
Kei-sasuke Kei-sasuke is offline
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I thought i did what's right.
I thought I had the anwsers
I thought I chose the surest road,
but that road brought me here.

And I put up a fight
and told you how to help me
now just when I'm giving up
the truth is coming clear........

In a forest outside the sound village, a dark figure was being chased.
"I was such a moron to belieive him." was the thought that raced through the fugitive's mind.
Shouts could be heard behind him. The man's dark hair moved with the wind a his black eyes searched for an escape. A old familiar face popped into his mind,
"I'll drag you back if I have to! But I won't let Orchimaru take you!" the old friend warned him years before but he was to blind to listen.
"I'm sorry." he remembered the friend's beaten form laying on the wet ground."I'm so sorry."

You knew better then I
You knew the way.
I've let go the need to know why
for you knew better than I.........

The voices were closer, he looked back, he could clearly see Kabuto's face now.
"The snake couldn't come after me himself!" he thought in comptemt.
He smirked at the thought of Orchimaru battered and beaten, bleeding on the stone floor.
"Now why didn't he use his vessal to get me....Oh, that's right." he laughed.

If this has been a test
I can not see the reason
but maybe knowing I don't know
is part of getting through
i tried to do what's best
and friednship made it easy
to see the best thing I can do
is put my trust in you...........

More faces flashed through his mind, resting on one he knew from the day he was born.
"Brother, why....why did you do this to me." a few tears dropped down. This brought back memories of the night he left his home and friends behind. tears fell on a stone path as he foolish ingored the plea.And so many more that cam eafter it.
"Why did I act that way?" he moaned.

You knew better then I
You knew the way
I've let go the need to know why
for you knew better then I

I saw a cloud and thought
it was the sky
I saw a bird and thought that I could follow
But it was you who helped that bird
to fly
If I let you reach me
will you teach me..........

"So many memories, so much pain." Ahead of him were some nijia of the sound.
"****,why can't you be here with me?" he cried into the night.

For you knew better then I
you knew the way
I've let go the need to know why
I'll take what answers you supply
You know better than I....

Left to die, the young boy let the rain soak his body.
Outnumbered, he was beaten heavily.
His body was broken and no longer of value to his old lord.
"I'm sorry, I failed..........Naruto." his eyes closed in a fatel sleep.

ok, if you like it i will contiue, if not oh well.
kei-sasuke
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Old 02-05-2008, 04:19 AM
Naruclone Naruclone is offline
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THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep going for sure!
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Old 02-05-2008, 09:34 AM
Kei-sasuke Kei-sasuke is offline
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OMG, youre my bro, of course you think it is!!!! or i would beat you up, lOL
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Old 03-30-2008, 08:18 AM
Aria Illiria Aria Illiria is offline
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Angry Where????

Where in HELL is that other page!!!!???
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