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08-06-2007, 01:52 PM
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Hey There Hinata- A Song FanFiction (NarutoXHinata)
Hey there Delilah,
Hinata goes outside What’s it like in New York City? Hinata walks around I’m a thousand miles away, Hinata looks up at sky But girl tonight you look so pretty, She smiles Yes you do, She grins Time Square can’t shine as bright as you, She looks at a lantern on the ground I swear it’s true. She blushes Hey there Delilah, She goes back inside Don’t you worry about the distance, A few tears weld up I’m right there if you get lonely, She looks at a picture of Naruto Give this song another listen, She starts crying Close your eyes, She closes her eyes Listen to my voice it’s my disguise, She nods her head I’m by your side. She imagines naruto beside her Oh it’s what you do to me, Oh it’s what you do to me, Oh it’s what you do to me, Oh it’s what you do to me, What you do to me. She kisses the picture Hey there Delilah, She looks down at the ground I know times are getting hard, She looks at her bills But just believe me girl some day, She nods her head in digust I'll pay the bills with this guitar, She wants Naruto to come home We'll have it good, She has an excited expression on her face We'll have the life we knew we would, She glances up My word is good. She nods Hey there Delilah, Naruto looks up at sky from window I’ve got so much left to say, Naruto writes a letter to Hinata If every simple song I wrote to you, Naruto looks at crumpled up pieces by his trash can Would take your breath away, Naruto ponders I’d write it all, He begins to write a second song Even more in love with me you’d fall, Naruto looks at a picture of Hinata We’d have it all. He sighs Oh it’s what you do to me, Oh it’s what you do to me, Oh it’s what you do to me, Oh it’s what you do to me. Naruto blows a kiss towards the picture A thousand miles seems pretty far, Hinata reaches her hand out But they’ve got planes and trains and cars, Naruto goes to the computer to look up bus schedules I’d walk to you if I had no other way, Naruto begins to walk on the highway Our friends would all make fun of us, Sasuke, Kiba, and Neji laugh at him And we'll just laugh along because, Naruto holds out his fist but then puts it down We know that none of them have felt this way, Naruto smiles Delilah I can promise you, Naruto pulls out the ring he has for Hinata That by the time that we get through, He imagines her expression The world will never ever be the same, He pictures their wedding And you’re to blame. Naruto grins Hey there Delilah you be good, Hinata sees of Naruto is online And don’t you miss me, Hinata shrugs her shoulders Two more years and you’ll be done with school, Hinata gathers up her school books And I'll be making history, It starts raining Like I do, Naruto gets splashed with water from a truck You’ll know it's all because of you, Naruto looks at the picture he has of Hinata in his hand We can do whatever we want to, Naruto does resangan on the truck and passes by Hey there Delilah here's to you, The truck driver chases Naruto This one’s for you. Naruto kicks the driver in the stomach and keeps walking Oh it’s what you do to me, Oh it’s what you do to me, Oh it’s what you do to me, Oh it’s what you do to me, What you do to me. Naruto approaches Hinata's dorm Ohhh Hinata walks out of her dorm to get to class when she sees Naruto standing there.They hug. *Ehhh, not my style of writting and not my favorite song but I thought it was worth a shot. ** Special Credit To LH for the idea of a song fanfiction *** Lol, I know this is horrible. I wrote it as I was typing. 
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08-06-2007, 02:01 PM
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08-06-2007, 02:03 PM
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Oh god no! wtf is this... please change the song please! tis song hurts my ears and my eyes are literally bleeding from reading the song lyrics
please! I BEG OF YOU DO NOT POST THE LYRICS TO THAT GOD-AWFUL SONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  
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08-06-2007, 02:08 PM
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08-06-2007, 02:09 PM
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pretty good 8/10 u should make it into an amv
and I love that song!!!!
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08-06-2007, 02:10 PM
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08-06-2007, 02:15 PM
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I don't love the song but it's ok. As for the story, It would have been better if you wrote it like I did, no lyrics adn makes it into a real story with many details. but I liked it. And it was my favorite couple lolz. 9/10 from me. ^^
~Lil Hinata-Chan
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08-06-2007, 02:21 PM
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Thanks for all the reviews =]
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