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Old 09-29-2012, 08:45 AM
world of pein world of pein is offline
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ok so i created this card, thought it would be a kool card for the format. it may be OP, but i thought it was pretty balanced overall. any input on it is appreciated. Note: this may be the wrong place to put this thread, but it seemed like this was "general". Flaming will be almost completely ignored. Maybe.

The image would be: Kid naruto, standing beside kid sakura, standing beside kid sasuke. Behind them, shippuden naruto, beside shippuden sakura, beside shippuden sasuke. And finally behind them, the 3 sannin(obviously adjacent to their student). Flavor text: "Wow, this card is more winning than charlie sheen..."
Name: 3 Of A Kind
Permanent Mission
Wind/Water/Earth
Entrance cost: 3
Hand cost: 2
Permanent: (1) Revitalize

If this mission is in your chakra area, it can be played as if it was in your hand with its entrance cost increased by 2.
When this mission would be removed from play, even if its activation would be negated, discard it(as long as i am correct about the way Revitalize works). During the turn this card is activated(doesnt have to resolve), effects gained through inherit are negated after activation.
Effect: When this card resolves successfully, you must declare a ninja card name. Only ninjas with that name may be put in play during this turn. Move up to 3 ninja cards with different names, each with at least one symbol that is different than one symbol on the other cards selected, from your discard pile to your hand. Then apply one of the following effects according to how many cards were moved.
1 ninja. Draw 3 cards.
2 ninjas. Draw 2 card.
3 ninjas. Choose one of the following and apply it. X. Discard 1 random card from your opponents hand. Y. Your opponent selects 1 card in their hand, then reveals all the others not selected. Then draw 1 card.
If one or more of the selected ninja cards had an entrance cost of 5 or more, do not apply any of the above effects upon this cards resolution.
When this mission would be removed from play, apply one of the 3 effects at the end of the turn according to which of the 3 effects was activated/would have been activated.
X. If effect 1 would have been activated discard one card from your hand.
Y. If effect 2 would have been activated, discard 2 cards from your hand. OR discard 1 card from your hand and your opponent draws 1 card.
Z. If effect 3 would have been activated, discard 2 cards from your hand and move your turn marker down by 1. OR your opponent draws 2 cards and move your turn marker down by 1. OR discard 1 card from your hand and move your turn marker down by 2.

I know the wording might be sloppy, but you get the picture. I thought the card looked really balanced. My only issue is you could gain a huge advantage in those 2 turns you have by the ninja restoration and the drawing , and i had considered making the effects: 1. draw 2, 2. draw 1, and 3. no drawing 1 at the end of effect 3. but doing this would make it that much bigger of a negative impact on the user when the effect resolved in those 2 turns because you already have less cards when the drawback occurs. any input would be appreciated. thanks
This should be clash since it can't be printed on the card cuz there's too many words yo
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Old 09-29-2012, 09:06 AM
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This should be clash since it can't be printed on the card cuz there's too many words yo
LOL

yeah, maybe bandai should switch printing companies again to accommodate this.
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Old 09-29-2012, 03:02 PM
UshioxChanx711 UshioxChanx711 is offline
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it wasnt a matter of the card being too long to print, cuz obviously bandai just doesnt jump in on peoples card ideas and use them for them self. this card was a matter of just a neat effect that would be kool to see on a card. and about it being too long, if they did make this card im sure they would find ways to shorten the effect. not to mention there have been some long card effects in naruto history.
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Old 09-29-2012, 03:04 PM
UshioxChanx711 UshioxChanx711 is offline
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i started to read this and the English was so bad my eyes started to bleed and i kno a thing or 2 about bad english
well then clearly you are illiterate, or have eye problems sir. i take pride in my spelling, and we all make spelling errors when we are typing fast and arent really concerned because people know what you mean most of the time.
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Old 09-29-2012, 03:06 PM
UshioxChanx711 UshioxChanx711 is offline
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This is like a 3-4 card combo on 1 card... WAY too complicated. You need to settle down. SIMMA DOWN NOW
i dont know exactly what you mean by that. there are plenty of drawback opportunitys on this card, and it could be edited a little to make it more balanced if people would give me some feedback. dont give criticism if its not going to be constructive.
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Old 09-29-2012, 03:09 PM
UshioxChanx711 UshioxChanx711 is offline
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LOL

yeah, maybe bandai should switch printing companies again to accommodate this.
it was hard for me to tell, but was that remark saying you like my card? if you do, anything you could tell me that you like or dont like about it would be appreciated as i have seen some of your posts, and you seem like a decent person who isnt going to be idiotic about this like others have already.
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Old 09-29-2012, 03:14 PM
UshioxChanx711 UshioxChanx711 is offline
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What do I think... TLDR
ok if its too long and you didnt read it, then why are you wasting my time by posting something like this when i am expecting some constructive criticism? im sure you have better things you couldve done with that wasted time. or maybe you didnt? hard to say with some of these people...
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Old 09-29-2012, 03:16 PM
UshioxChanx711 UshioxChanx711 is offline
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This should be clash since it can't be printed on the card cuz there's too many words yo
i agree the card may be kinda longish, but the usefulness of the effect suits the length. who knows maybe bandai will like this card and post the effect online, effectively making it there first textless promo
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Old 09-29-2012, 03:19 PM
Seventh Path Seventh Path is offline
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ok if its too long and you didnt read it, then why are you wasting my time by posting something like this when i am expecting some constructive criticism? im sure you have better things you couldve done with that wasted time. or maybe you didnt? hard to say with some of these people...
Welcome to the Internet. Its not a pleasant place.

Anywho, Long effects normally are troublesome because they become complicated and easily misinterpreted. Look what happened with the Tshucikage. Tylar made a joke saying that they were considering extending his text box just because he's so short.

As for the effect, the only part I really liked was the play from chakra at a +2 Entrance Cost. You may have something there. It'd be cool to have missions do that. Not the draw missions but the utility missions. Its also been done before in MtG. Flashback was a pretty big deal I hear

Also for the future We have a card creation section
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Old 09-29-2012, 03:20 PM
UshioxChanx711 UshioxChanx711 is offline
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anyone who has something IMPORTANT or USEFUL(key words here) to say, that isnt just wasting my time and their own, please feel free to chime in here and give your 2 cents about the card.
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