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Old 08-17-2010, 02:33 PM
Hiro Hikari Hiro Hikari is offline
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Alright folks, here's the deal. Too many times have I entered Create-A-Character threads and one of two things happen: 1)Everyone makes broken characters and the creator, and everybody else, loses interest, or 2)The creator gets lazy and the thread gets abandoned. On that note, I have decided to make a thread of my own for people's own characters. Here is my character, and the template you should follow for submitting your character

Name:Kurai Kichigai
Rank:Jonin
Age:18
Gender:Male
Village:Iwakagure
Physical Description:6 feet, 7 inches tall, thin, but muscular, long auburn and black hair tied up in a ponytail that reaches his shoulder blades,Iwakagure bandanna, green eyes, dark circles under his eyes, black, zip-up, long-sleeved shirt with the left sleeve torn off, dark brown pants that cover 3/4 of his legs, black boots that cover 1/4 of his legs, two spikes on the toe of each boot that resemble drills, metal gloves on each hand with the Iwakagure symobl on the back of his hand and one-and-a-half inch long drills on each knuckle
History:Born into the Kichigai clan, a clan of powerful Ninja Miners, Kurai had a relatively normal life. As a child, he seemed to have a great talent digging holes. He would go out to play and an hour later, would be found in a kilometre long tunnel he dug himself. He became a chunin at age 11. After he awakened the Fuutengan at age 12, people seemed to grow slightly afraid of him. Shortly after he turned 14, he became a jonin. When his father died, he made Kurai the leader and gave him the clan weapon Horimasu, even though he was only 15. Several people challenged Kurai's right to lead the clan, but those people were swiftly defeated by him. Some time after he turned 16, he made a master blacksmith craft him the weapon Tonneru. For the past three years, he has been the head of his clan. Even many people thinks he has lost every bit of his sanity, his leadership has brought his clan to be one of the strongest in Iwakagure.
Personality:Seems insane, but is intelligent, caring, and powerful. Always has a grin on his face, which scares people at first, but people like him when they get to know him. He has a habit of maniacally laughing when he is fighting someone, which tends to scare his opponents. Takes a phenominal amount of care to Horimasu and Tonneru, cleaning them and sharpening them after every battle
Ninjutsu:Earth Style: Great Canyon Jutsu
Earth Style:Rampart Wall
Earth Style:Stalagtite Jutsu
Earth Style:Stalagmite Jutsu
Earth Style:Ground Shark Jutsu
Ninja Miner Style:Mine Shaft Jutsu
Ninja Miner Style:Cave In Jutsu
Summoning Jutsu:Mole
A variety of other Earth Style Jutsu
Genjutsu:Fuutengan
Taijutsu:A complex weaponry style he developed using Horimasu and Tonneru
Weapons:Kunai, shuriken, paper bombs, Horimasu:a large, earth-chakra-enforced pickaxe with a 4-foot long wooden handle and two, 3-foot long, curved blades with a spike on the top (keeps it strapped on his back), and Tonneru:two earth-chakra-enforced pickaxes with 2-foot-long metal handles (connected to each other by a 5-foot-long chain), 1-foot-long blades, and two-inch-long drills opposite those blades (wraps the chain around the pickaxes and keeps them strapped on his belt)
Kekkai Genkai:Fuutengan-The user's irises become yellow and three purple lines come out of the pupil and go all the way to the edges of the cornea. If the user maintains eye contact with the target for three seconds with the Fuutengan active, the target will enter a genjutsu, containing their worst fears and nightmares with a variety of other tortures. A person affected by the Fuutengan can be identified by their shruken pupils, glazed-over eyes, and rapid eye movement. Even after the user breaks eye contact, the target will remain under the genjutsu until the user dismisses the genjutsu, runs out of chakra, or if the user or target die. The genjustu cannot be broken by an outside source. Prolonged use will cause insanity.
Other:Has a summoning contract with ninja moles
Ninjutsu:4.5 Taijutsu:4 Genjutsu:5 Intelligence:4 Strength:5 Speed:4 Stamina4 Hand Seals:4 Total:34.5

On that note, I want to throw down a few groundrules
1)If your character is going to have an already existing Kekkai Genkai, don't give him/her two. One or the other pal. Also, don't give them extinct KG such as Kimimaro's or the First Hokage's
2)I don't know when in the Naruto timeline this is going to take place, but for now, no sons/daughters of already existing characters or being taught by already existing characters.
3)YOUR CHARACTER CANNOT KNOW RASENGAN, CHIDORI, OR ANY VARIATIONS OF THEM. I cannot count how many times I have seen this.
4)Just because there is a space for KG, does not mean you have to give your character one
5)No tailed beasts. At all.
6)Make the age, rank, and physical description make some amount of sense.
7)If I deem your character as 'broken', I will not include them in the FF
8)Try to add some variety. If you notice that everyone's character is a 16 year old male chunin from the Hidden Leaf village, mix it up a bit. Make your character a 12 year old femal genin from the hidden grass village.

That's all I can think of for now. After a suitable amount of characters have been chosen, I will start the FF. Enjoy

Last edited by Hiro Hikari : 08-27-2010 at 07:22 PM. Reason: Added Ninja Handbook Stats
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Old 08-22-2010, 12:07 AM
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Here is my character
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Name:Ryuu Namizake
Rank:Chunin
Age:14
Gender:Male
Village:Village Hidden in the Sand
Physical Descriptions:5 Feet 6 Inches tall, somewhat muscular, Brown Skin, Black Hair that barely reaches his Eyebrows, Eyes different colors(Left green, the right blue), Crimson shirt with a white dragon(the symbol of his clan) on the back, Black shorts that reach well below his knees, and he goes barefooted.
History:Ryuu was born into the Namizake clan, a clan whose symbol was the dragon. His parents were the weakest of the clan, but when he was born, they sensed something within him, and gave him the name Ryuu, which means dragon. He quickly master multiple ninjutsu known only to the clan, and was known as "The Prodigy of the Dragon" by the rest of the clan. However, even though he was a prodigy, for some reason, he graduated from the Ninja Academy at 12. And yet, after that, it took him only 6 months to become a Chunin. Right after he became a chunin, He went on a dangerous mission to the Land of rice patties, where his whole squad was ambushed. His teammates were killed by a single un-named ninja. Watching them die one by one awakened a deep anger within Ryuu, and his fists caught on fire, yet he didnt burn. At the same time, his right eye(which was green, like his left one) became blue. Ryuu's anger steadily rose, and along with it, the fire started to consume his entire body. Yet he did not burn. He used his newfound power to Kill the murderer, and he then escaped back into the Sand village. Right when he got there, he collapsed from exhaustion. After some rest, he went to the head of his clan and described his experience to him. The head then informed Ryuu that only those who are True prodigies of the clan have awakened this power, which originally belonged to the founder of the clan. This was known as the Dragon Fists, a type of KKG that very few possesed in the clan. Since then, Ryuu has trained to master the Dragon Fists.
Personality:Seems to be a proper, well mannered person around elders, but around his peers, he is fun loving and always looking to test his streanght out against others. He is a decent student, but also a brilliant stratigist. However, he also cares too much for his friends, and that may one day be his downfall.
Ninjutsu:Fire Style: Dragon Flame Jutsu
Fire Style: Fireball Justu
Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu
Water Style: Giant Water Vortex
Namizake Style: Ancient Dragon Jutsu(basically with one hand he forms signs for fire dragon, and signs for water dragon in the other, combineing them into a vicious and powerful move.)
Namizake Style: Fire Blade Jutsu(makes a sword out of fire, and uses it like a sword. the more chakra he puts into it, the longer it can become)
Namizake Style Summoning: Dragon
various other water and fire style techniques.
Genjutsu: Ryuu has little genjutsu skill, and can barely prefrom the simplest of genjutsu
Taijutsu: very Fast, and hits hard, despite his apperance. He can open the First three of the 8 inner gates.
Weapons:Kunai, Shuriken, and Deamon Windmill Shuriken. He also has a sword made of Chakra reacting metal. He pours chakra into it, and the element of the chakra wraps around the sword. He rarely uses it however.
Kekkei Genkai:Dragon Fists- The person with the KKG has different color eyes(this is permanent). The right will always be blue, while the left will be the original color of the eye. Fire envelopes the users hand, and, on some occasions, his whole ody. And type of justu used while the Dragon Fists are activated will amp up the jutsus power considerably, unless its a Namizake style ninjutsu. In that case, the Jutsus power triples. However, it drains alot of energy from the user. The fire is always black.
Other: He has a summoning contract with Dragons. Most of these dragons just look like dragons, but have little physical capabilities. They can, however, attach to the summoner and tranform into various parts, like dragon wings, dragon claws, and some can even transform into weapons. Only the head of the clan is a true dragon. It can also breathe fire.

Ninjutsu:5 Taijutsu:4 Genjutsu:1 Intellegance:4 Streagnth: 4 Speed:5 Stamina:4 Hand Seals:3 Total:30

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Old 08-22-2010, 11:39 AM
Susano'o the Storm God Susano'o the Storm God is offline
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I'll make one latr today. I need to think of hight and name. I'm not very good with names.
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Old 08-22-2010, 07:41 PM
Susano'o the Storm God Susano'o the Storm God is offline
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I got 2 characters if you don't mind. Also, are we allowed to make up villages?

Name: Kuroshi Karasu
Rank: S-Class Missing Nin
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Village: Darkness
Physical Description: 5 feet, 5 inches tall, a little thin, and has black, uncombed hair, which in the back, goes down to the top-center of the neck, and down to the eyebrows from the front, and covers the ears on the side. His hair also has a slight jagged tone on the back and the sides and additionally bears a resemblance to that of the Uchiha. His eyes are black and he has a black, hooded cloak, along with a V-shaped opening down to the bottom of the chest and over-sized sleeves. Under his cloak is a blue V-collar T-shirt (like the Akatsuki) and black pants. Finally, Kuroshi has a black (big surprise?) sheaf for his sword on his right hip, held by a black sash tied around his waist. As an extra piece of info, Kuroshi is left-handed.
History: Not much is known about Kuroshi's history except that he became a Jonin at the age of 12, and that he uses a the Dark Style, which is a Hiden jutsu developed by the mysterious Karasu clan who originated from a hidden village they lead known as "The Village Hidden in the Darkness". The fire related Dark Style jutsus can only be extinguished by B-Rank or higher water jutsu, except for the more powerful Dark Style techniques, which would require A-Rank techniques, and are much hotter than normal fire.
Personality: Sadistic and arrogant, although he has the strength to back up his arrogance. Known for having defeated over 5 jonin lvl Ninja all at once by himself. Other than sadism, Kuroshi shows almost no emotion in any situation. He is also very deceitful and is very smart. Kuroshi always has a cloth with him to clean his sword, Mayonaka (Midnight). He also has the advantage of not caring about his surroundings, allowing him to fight to the fullest without worry. Kuroshi also states that his favorite animal is the phoenix.
Ninjutsu: Fire Style: Ripping Flames - (wedges Mayonaka in the ground and swings it, mixing his own chakra, friction, and force, to create flames in a straight line that move very fast towards the opponent, along with very powerful cutting ability.)
Fire Style: Phoenix Slice - (makes a short jump and spins around using his own chakra to create fire around his sword, and slashes at his opponent. After the initial swing, Kuroshi can swing his sword in any direction, even down, and create a phoenix figure that badly burns whatever it makes contact with.)
Fire Style: Meteor Shot - (raises a hand into the air and compresses his chakra to create a meteor(s). Number, speed, and size all depend on the amount of chakra used. Additionally, Kuroshi can make the meteors explode.)
Dark Style: Shadow Dragon - (when Kuroshi swings Mayonaka, his chakra makes his sword double in length. However his opponent cannot see the chakra. Should the opponent touch the chakra, he/she loses 5% of both his/her mental and physical energy. However, should the victim make contact with the actual blade, he/she loses 10% of the his/her physical and mental energy instead.)
Dark Style: Nightmare Flames - (blasts blue fire from his mouth that is much hotter than ordinary fire.)
Dark Style: Cursed Fire - (blue flames that are blasted from the mouth. These flames will continually chase you, and will revive even if you extinguish them unless you use an A-Rank water technique. Much hotter than ordinary fire.)
Dark Style: Nightmare Spiral - (Kuroshi spins Mayonaka in the air creating a spiral of blue fire. The blue fire then infuses with the blade. Whatever makes contact with the blade gets badly burned by the initial attack. The flames then leave the sword and precede to attack the target.)
Dark Style: Oblivion - (Kuroshi blasts a blue fire at the target from his mouth. Once the flames make contact with either the target or the ground, they explode into a big mass of fire that covers a very large area. This jutsu is essentially a stronger version of Kakuzu's "Fire Style: Searing Migraine. It covers a slightly larger area, and the flames will either turn to ash, or BADLY burn whatever it hits. Only those that are very close to the flames when the explode are turned into a pile of ash. The flames can only be extinguished by at least an A-Rank Water Jutsu.)
Earth Style: Planet Splitter
Midnight Eclipse - (points sword toward the sun/moon. Kuroshi then uses a massive amount of chakra to completely block all light, basically leaving the battlefield pitch-black for at least 15 minutes. Can extend time by using more chakra.)
a variety of other Fire Style and Dark Style jutsu.
Genjutsu: despite being sadistic, Kuroshi does not use Genjutsu very often.
Taijutsu: Kuroshi will typically use just taijutsu if he does not deem his opponent worthy. When using his Mayonaka, Kuroshi never punches, but he still uses kicks every now and then. Kuroshi is VERY fast.
Weapons: Kuroshi has typical Ninja gear, kunai, shuriken, and paper bombs although in a small amount. Kuroshi's main weapon in Mayonaka, a black single edged sword, with a 2 foot long blade, and a 6 inch handle with a silver ribbon around it. Kuroshi generally holds the sword with one hand (his left cause he's left-handed). Finally, Mayonaka is made out of obsidian, making the blade extremely sharp (Sharp enough to cleanly slice things in half). Additionally, Mayonaka cannot be damaged at all. IOWs, it cannot get scratched, wear out, break, ect.
Kekkei Genkai: Yamigan-a grey ring appears in the user's irises and a black ring appears around the irises. Additionally, black, jagged lines appear, and start from the iris, to the end of the eye, around the eye like this:
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....\ / (edge of iris) \ /
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kinda rough but you get the idea. Anyways, the Yamigan gives the user the following abilities: Mind reading, night vision, gives the user prediction capabilities like the sharingan, viewing the flow of chakra, and the ability to copy only one jutsu at a time ignoring all requirements, except for Dojutsu. If Kuroshi attempts to copy another jutsu, he loses the previously coped jutsu. at the moment, Kuroshi copied Earth Style: Planet Splitter. Additionally, Kuroshi learned to use one-handed hand seals.
Other: Has a summoning contract with corrupted phoenixes. The phoenixes are black, and the flames they create are blue. Finally, Kuroshi has one final attack:
Secret Karasu Technique: Sweeping Darkness - (Kuroshi prepares to swing his sword. When he is about to swing, he takes a step with his right foot and then destroys the boundaries of speed by going faster than the speed of light, and appears right behind the target. The intense speed results in the target thinking Kuroshi simply teleported behind the target. However, the speed causes the effects of Kuroshi's attack being delayed by a few seconds. Kuroshi will almost always stab the heart. The jutsu however, also shortens Kuroshi's lifespan by a 5 years with each use. Do not mistake this as aging. Kuroshi length of life was simply reduced. Due to the risk, Kuroshi rarely uses this attack. Kuroshi has currently used this attack once in his life time.)

To get an even better idea on Kuroshi's ability, here is a databook style stats:
Ninjutsu: 5 Taijutsu: 3.5 Genjutsu: 3.5 Intelligence: 5 Strength: 4 Speed: 5 (off the charts) Stamina: 4 Hand Seals: 4.5 Total: 34.5

lol, I think I made the jutsu descriptions too detailed...
Kuroshi is supposed to have a partner, so I'll make his partner later.
For more info on the "Darkness" Village, it is literally hidden by darkness because the Karasu clan made the area eternally nighttime, effectively making the village hard to see because it has high Black walls to block out the light in the village.

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Old 08-22-2010, 11:48 PM
Hiro Hikari Hiro Hikari is offline
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[quote=Susano'o the Storm God;1162225]I got 2 characters if you don't mind. Also, are we allowed to make up villages?QUOTE]

Sure! Go for it. Just try to make it as unique as possible.
Depending on how many other people submit characters, I might toss in a second one as well.
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Old 08-23-2010, 10:46 PM
Susano'o the Storm God Susano'o the Storm God is offline
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Here is Kuroshi's partner. I'll introduce him bit by bit.

Name: Zangei
Rank: S-Class Missing Nin
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Village: used to be leaf
Physical Description: In his original form, Zangei is 5 feet, 10 inches tall, a little skinnier than Kuroshi, and has brown hair that is a little messy, but otherwise flat at the top but pointy at the end around the head. The hair is a little longer and curves around the sides of his face. The back is still pointy but messier and it extends about the same length as the sides, while the front extends up to just above the eyebrows. His irises are an aqua color while the pupils are dark blue. Finally, Zangei's clothing is the same as Kuroshi's except he replaces the hood with simply a high collar, he doesn't have a black sash, and his pants are just a dark grey instead of black.
History: Zangei got dead last in his academy years. He had as much chakra as Naruto did, but his chakra control was even worse. It was so bad, that he didn't graduate until 13. when he was 15, Zangei finally learned how to control his chakra properly. Unfortunately, at the next chunin exam, Zangei still was unable to pass due to a devestating defeat by a rookie who had a powerful un-named kekkei genkai. After this defeat, he became jealous because both his former teamates reached chunin 2 years ago, and they both had kekkei genkai. Zangei then sought out a forbidden un-named jutsu that allowed him to steal the souls of other people, thus stealing all their abilities. At the age of 20, he finally mastered it. In a mission, he attacked his former teammates from behind using his soul stealing technique. Horrified at what he had done, the 2 jonin's who were there attempted to kill him. With his new found power, Zangei easily killed them. He smirked, and never returned to the village. When he was 29, he met up with Kuroshi, who wanted Zangei to be his partner. Zanegei, then challenged Kuroshi, but he soon realized Kuroshi's power when he got hit by Kuroshi's Dark Style attacks. From then on, he followed Kuroshi's orders.
Personality: He is much more rational then Kuroshi and is not afraid to scold him for playing with his opponents. Despite this, Zangei has a fear of Kuroshi. Zangei is calm and intelligent, and prefers to end his battles quickly. Outside of battle, he is very proper, referring to Kuroshi as "san" and he uses honorifics for even his enemies. For those who don't know, honorifics are terms used in Japanese culture to show respect, or in some cases, "Chan" is used as disrespect, as seen with Hidan. It goes like this: "Chan" is for little kids. "San" places someone above them. "Sama" is the equivalent of "Lord". "Dono" is used usually to Daimyos, but it is used more commonly by extremely respectful people, such as Himura Kenshin.
Ninjutsu: Earth Style: Root Frenzy - (One of Zangei's few original jutsu, Summons Giant, spiked, roots out of the earth, which he uses in an attempt to crush, or impale his opponents.)
Ice Style: Icicle Rush - (Most effective in a cave-like environment, which could be created with Earth Style. Zangei slams his hand onto the ground, and any number of icicles in any pattern will sping from the ground in an attempt to pierce his opponent, assuming there's moisture in the air... (Hidden Mist jutsu anyone?)
Ice Style: Absolute - (Summons a Giant Glacier with a circular base and a very sharp pointed tip. On average, it has a radius of 1.5 meters and a height of about 7 meters. Additionally, the glacier has invisible small chakra blades surrounding it that cuts whatever gets too close to it effectively numbing whatever gets cut a little bit. Idea comes from ToS)
Ice Style: Absolute Zero! - (The same as Absolute, except the size is double, and the ice's temperature is literally Absolute Zero, hence the name. (I'm too lazy to utilize what rlly happens with stuff at this temperature...) Anyways, This attack is extremely dangerous for everyone in the area. (includes the user in most cases) It will instantly freeze anything within 5 meters of the glacier, and anything around the area will be numbed and their reaction time will be reduced, along with the possibility of frostbite, or hypothermia. Zangei however, has recently developed a pill that will negate these effects for only 2 minutes. He only has 1 though, because he could only make one once per month. Because of the risks of the jutsu, Zangei only uses it as a last resort.)
Lava Style: Lava Rainstorm - (a dangerous jutsu if the target is not a Water Style user. However, if they are, then this jutsu could be extinguished with simply a C-Rank Water jutsu. Only problem is though, is that Zangei's ice style basically turns the water into weapons... Anyways, Zangei shoot lava from his mouth into the air basically making it rain down on the opponent.)
Lava Style: Lava Bullet - (Although the attack itself is small, If the user is accurate, the jutsu is extremlely deadly because of it's sheer speed. The jutsu can be extinguished with any water attack, but it usually goes too fast for most Ninja to be able react in time. Zangei however, is a little accurate, but not super accurate. In pokemon terms, the accuracy for Zangei in hitting a vital point is 65.)
Ninja Art: Fence slash - (One of Zangei's few original jutsu. Anyway, Zangei uses a pair of Kodachi, and swings at his opponent from up to down in an X shape. Zangei channels massive amounts of Wind Chakra into his blades which makes the technique un-blockable and creates a Fence-patterned slice accross the target, effectively killing them. Zangei likes to use Shadow Clone jutsu and his speed to confuse his opponent to make completing the attack easier.)
Soul Stealing Technique - (The main source of Zangei's power. To steal a soul, Zangei simply places his hand where the heart would be from either the front or back, and rips out their soul. Zangei could only have 2 extra souls. He acquires the abilities of the victims. Each soul Zangei has gives him an extra life. If he is "killed", Zangei could sacrifice any soul in his place. Also, Zangei could take on the forms of the souls he possesses. Finally the amount of Stamina/chakra of all of Zangei's victims is added on to his own. However, there is a drawback to this. As an example only: Zangei has 300% chakra total. both his extra souls has 100% chakra. If he uses 20% chakra, and a soul dies. In addition to the chakra Zangei already uses, he loses chakra equivalent to the amount of chakra the sacrificed soul gave, thus reducing Zangei's chakra to 180%. Basically, if he's not careful, he could just die right then and there due to chakra exhaustion. Problem is, Zangei, naturally, has as much chakra as Shippuden Naruto (excluding Ninetails) Finally, Zangei could separate all the souls and have them fight independently like Kakuzu.)
various other earth, wind, water, fire, lava, and ice jutsus.
Genjutsu: Zangei has a Genjutsu that makes the opponent think the world is completely reversed, called "Flipped World". Up is down, down is up, left is right, right is left, and whatever they see that is in front of them is actually behind them and vise-verse. This idea came from bleach.
Taijutsu: Just basic Taijutsu. Nothing special.
Weapons: basic ninja equipment, along with the ability to generate short swords for a very small amount of chakra.
Kekkei Genkai: none that was acquired naturally.
Other: none

To get an even better idea on Zangei's ability, here is a databook style stats:
Ninjutsu: 4.5 Taijutsu: 3 Genjutsu: 4 Intelligence: 5 Strength: 3 Speed: 4.5 Stamina: 5 Hand Seals: 4 Total: 33

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Old 08-23-2010, 11:19 PM
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Name: Narako Tizashi

Rank: Unknown

Age: Unknown, but older than 30

Gender: Male

Village: Rogue

Physical Description:5 feet, 10 inches tall, full built body of a man. Deep brown eyes and a scar that reaches from above his left eye down to the right corner of his lip.Very muscular with long, seemingly uncut black hair in the back that reaches his shoulders while the front is just above his eyebrows. Has a black tanktop that the middle is open, kind of like a button down but no buttons so the front is open. The bottom of the shirt is jagged around the edges. Long black pants with several rips from weapon cuts and short boots that are light weight. He also carries 2 Krises each one hanging on the left and right side of his belt. Tattoos flourish his upper arms and a set of tribal tattoos around the middle of his forearm.

History:The history of Naruko is generally unknown as he has been a rogue ninja for years, no one is sure what village he came from or who he really serves because he has been seen helping regular people on the roads before. However he hasn't came into contact with anyone from (insert place we are playing at here) and is only rarely seen in the forest by the city. No one knows where he travels or how old he is.

Personality: Also unknown, however he has helped regular people but not ninjas, he usually flees in the prescence of other ninjas but not pedestrians traveling across the land. Never has been seen with someone else though.

Ninjutsu: One time a group of 10 bandits was ambushing a caravan of traders and Narako appeared in a flash, it is thought that he has control over multiple elements, he has been seen using a lightning jutsu and a water based jutsu and a wind jutsu however his full powers are not revealed.
Lightning style: lightning strike jutsu - shoots a long bolt of electricity resembling a bolt of lightning at a fast speed toward target.
Wind style: Whirlwind Reflection jutsu - meant to stop enemy attacks, creates a whirlwind in front of him, that takes in the enemies attack and negates it. mainly used to counter fire, lightning and weapon attacks (weapons are thrown back out at the enemy, fire and lightning attacks are span into the whirlwind, disappearing)

Genjutsu: Unknown

Taijutsu: He carries around 2 Kris that he is able to infuse with different elements of chakra, he commonly uses them in fights and it is said he infuses them with water and earth type chakras.

Other: Everywhere he goes, a large white/grey wolf has been seen with him, this wolf also has tattoos along his back similar to the ones that narako has.
Also no kekki genkai is known however it is reported that he doesn't have a bloodline trait.

Ninjutsu:5 Taijutsu:5 Genjutsu:0 Intelligence:4 Strength:5 Speed:3 (but he uses teleport techniques) Stamina:4 Hand Seals:5 Total:31

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Old 08-24-2010, 02:53 PM
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The story is going to take place in the Ninja world. It's going to include the existing lands and villages and any others that people may create.
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Old 08-24-2010, 06:44 PM
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Susano'o your character is broken, lol.

but its still cool.

I might make anotherone later...if i get the time.
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Old 08-27-2010, 07:14 PM
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just read the full rules list
working on new characters right now.

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