Originally Posted by Naruto Is The Best
I only do it because it's generally the good authors that listen. ^^,
And I welcome constructive criticism.
But I'm not sure I understand your argument. My access to the Shippuden manga is limited and my Japanese is far from perfect, but so far I can tell, Hinata is able to talk to Naruto more or less normally after the time skip. And in this chapter she stutters once and stammers 10 times. I actually thought I was overdoing it... Is my understand incorrect?
I will admit that her shouting an order at Naruto is a little out of character, but she does immediately feel chagrinned.
Thank you for the feedback. I will certainly take some liberties with the source material (as all fan fic writers do), but if I go to far a field, please point it out.