Originally Posted by Xavon
Was the second chapter really so blah that it garners no comments?
Meh, sorry. I read it and got caught up with stuff, so I didn't comment.
Hinata seems a bit out of character, with her lack of stuttering and bossing Naruto a little, even though you'll probably say she has become completely confident in the matter of five minutes.
Aside from that, a good read.