Create-A-Character Thread and FF
Alright folks, here's the deal. Too many times have I entered Create-A-Character threads and one of two things happen: 1)Everyone makes broken characters and the creator, and everybody else, loses interest, or 2)The creator gets lazy and the thread gets abandoned. On that note, I have decided to make a thread of my own for people's own characters. Here is my character, and the template you should follow for submitting your character
Name:Kurai Kichigai
Rank:Jonin
Age:18
Gender:Male
Village:Iwakagure
Physical Description:6 feet, 7 inches tall, thin, but muscular, long auburn and black hair tied up in a ponytail that reaches his shoulder blades,Iwakagure bandanna, green eyes, dark circles under his eyes, black, zip-up, long-sleeved shirt with the left sleeve torn off, dark brown pants that cover 3/4 of his legs, black boots that cover 1/4 of his legs, two spikes on the toe of each boot that resemble drills, metal gloves on each hand with the Iwakagure symobl on the back of his hand and one-and-a-half inch long drills on each knuckle
History:Born into the Kichigai clan, a clan of powerful Ninja Miners, Kurai had a relatively normal life. As a child, he seemed to have a great talent digging holes. He would go out to play and an hour later, would be found in a kilometre long tunnel he dug himself. He became a chunin at age 11. After he awakened the Fuutengan at age 12, people seemed to grow slightly afraid of him. Shortly after he turned 14, he became a jonin. When his father died, he made Kurai the leader and gave him the clan weapon Horimasu, even though he was only 15. Several people challenged Kurai's right to lead the clan, but those people were swiftly defeated by him. Some time after he turned 16, he made a master blacksmith craft him the weapon Tonneru. For the past three years, he has been the head of his clan. Even many people thinks he has lost every bit of his sanity, his leadership has brought his clan to be one of the strongest in Iwakagure.
Personality:Seems insane, but is intelligent, caring, and powerful. Always has a grin on his face, which scares people at first, but people like him when they get to know him. He has a habit of maniacally laughing when he is fighting someone, which tends to scare his opponents. Takes a phenominal amount of care to Horimasu and Tonneru, cleaning them and sharpening them after every battle
Ninjutsu:Earth Style: Great Canyon Jutsu
Earth Style:Rampart Wall
Earth Style:Stalagtite Jutsu
Earth Style:Stalagmite Jutsu
Earth Style:Ground Shark Jutsu
Ninja Miner Style:Mine Shaft Jutsu
Ninja Miner Style:Cave In Jutsu
Summoning Jutsu:Mole
A variety of other Earth Style Jutsu
Genjutsu:Fuutengan
Taijutsu:A complex weaponry style he developed using Horimasu and Tonneru
Weapons:Kunai, shuriken, paper bombs, Horimasu:a large, earth-chakra-enforced pickaxe with a 4-foot long wooden handle and two, 3-foot long, curved blades with a spike on the top (keeps it strapped on his back), and Tonneru:two earth-chakra-enforced pickaxes with 2-foot-long metal handles (connected to each other by a 5-foot-long chain), 1-foot-long blades, and two-inch-long drills opposite those blades (wraps the chain around the pickaxes and keeps them strapped on his belt)
Kekkai Genkai:Fuutengan-The user's irises become yellow and three purple lines come out of the pupil and go all the way to the edges of the cornea. If the user maintains eye contact with the target for three seconds with the Fuutengan active, the target will enter a genjutsu, containing their worst fears and nightmares with a variety of other tortures. A person affected by the Fuutengan can be identified by their shruken pupils, glazed-over eyes, and rapid eye movement. Even after the user breaks eye contact, the target will remain under the genjutsu until the user dismisses the genjutsu, runs out of chakra, or if the user or target die. The genjustu cannot be broken by an outside source. Prolonged use will cause insanity.
Other:Has a summoning contract with ninja moles
Ninjutsu:4.5 Taijutsu:4 Genjutsu:5 Intelligence:4 Strength:5 Speed:4 Stamina4 Hand Seals:4 Total:34.5
On that note, I want to throw down a few groundrules
1)If your character is going to have an already existing Kekkai Genkai, don't give him/her two. One or the other pal. Also, don't give them extinct KG such as Kimimaro's or the First Hokage's
2)I don't know when in the Naruto timeline this is going to take place, but for now, no sons/daughters of already existing characters or being taught by already existing characters.
3)YOUR CHARACTER CANNOT KNOW RASENGAN, CHIDORI, OR ANY VARIATIONS OF THEM. I cannot count how many times I have seen this.
4)Just because there is a space for KG, does not mean you have to give your character one
5)No tailed beasts. At all.
6)Make the age, rank, and physical description make some amount of sense.
7)If I deem your character as 'broken', I will not include them in the FF
8)Try to add some variety. If you notice that everyone's character is a 16 year old male chunin from the Hidden Leaf village, mix it up a bit. Make your character a 12 year old femal genin from the hidden grass village.
That's all I can think of for now. After a suitable amount of characters have been chosen, I will start the FF. Enjoy
Last edited by Hiro Hikari : 08-27-2010 at 07:22 PM.
Reason: Added Ninja Handbook Stats
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