Hmmm, interesting. I was a little confused at first because it said 'present day' I thought that meant it was taking place in 2010. As for the Akatsuki. I have a feeling one of them will be Naruto, and I think that was who was in the prolouge. I'm probably way off though, but I'll see. The premise seems interesting, but it is a little hard to follow since I have no backgruond into what is going on. At what point in the manga does this take place? Whayt happened to Madara and all them? If you weren't planing on revealing this at a latter date it would be helpful back ground information. Even know the age of Konohamaru and the bunch would be helpful. Keep writting and I will keep reading.
long enough for you?