Originally Posted by Thayli
Best fanfic since hinata blush
Originally Posted by Sasuke of the desert
in the first chapter was that sasuke killing kakashi
Originally Posted by BigBlackoftheBlueRoses
ITS HARD TO IMPROVE WHEN I SEE NO FLAWS
Guess no one really wants to write a long paragraph or two... /).<
Naruto – Generation “X”
Volume One: Konoha
Chapter Two: To the Rescue!
“I-Impossible! How the hell did Konohamaru and Moegi get there!? They’re too smart to jump in the midst of all this!” a furious Kotetsu snapped. His body was shaking in fear, his eyes set on the two corpses. “… They’re dead! They’re just children!”
“In the Shinobi World there are no such things as child and adult, girl or boy, sick or healthy, a Shinobi is a Shinobi.” The Akatsuki in the center said, taking off his hood. Underneath of the garment was the face of a young man, roughly in his mid-twenties, with spiked brown hair, pointed upwards. His eyes were fixed in a dull expression and his mouth barely moved when speaking.
“Kago, you’re taking off you’re revealing your identity this soon?” The Akatsuki on the left questioned. He himself revealed his face by slowly taking down his shroud. Out came the face of another young man in his mid-twenties with a scar through his left eye. His expression was somewhat playful, while his black hair was also spiked up.
“You fool, you’re revealing his identity by saying his name.” The Akatsuki whom could use the Hokai no Jutsu corrected. He too lifted his hood from his head. A red haired man who seemed to be roughly the same age as the other two was revealed. His expression was somewhat angry.
“Now, now Yoru, no need to start infighting. As you can see we have opponents in front of us.” Kago said gently. Yoru nodded in agreement. “However, speaking of fighting, it seems that this battle is not finished. After all, it is five on three, they nearly double us.”
The Leaf Ninjas expressions changed, there were only three Akatsuki and three Leaf Ninja. If the corpses of Konohamaru and Moegi weren’t included, it had to be three on three. There was no other way.
“So I’m not the only one who picked the other two brats up? Eh?” Yoru asked. His eyes shifted from right to left, as if trying to seek something out. “What about you Toa?”
“Eh… Me? Two more..?” Toa said hesitantly, he obviously wasn’t aware of the other two Shinobi lurking around. “Eh, of course! The other two, they’re here somewhere!” He said trying to cover his elf. “Why don’t you use your Jutsu to blast away the trees to find them Yoru?”
In that instance the corpse of Moegi turned into another Konohamaru corpse within a puff of smoke. Soon after, both the corpses of Konohamaru also became enfolded in a puff of smoke and vanished. They were Shadow Clones!
“Kage Bunshin, eh?” Kago started, “Clever, those kids. Even after we stopped their movements they still pulled one over on us. Now the only question is, where are they?”
“Right here!” A familiar voice called. Within a few seconds a boy bursted through the ground underneath Yoru, hitting his chin with a strong fist. “Sarutobi Assault!” Yoru fell back after that pounding fist while Konohamaru landed back toward Udon, safely.
“Eh, where’s the other brat!” Yoru called angrily. He managed to get up after wobbling a bit.
“Over here!” The red headed Moegi jumped out of the shrubs near Yoru with a blue aura around her hands. She ran toward Yoru and hit his arms and legs with the technique, “Chakra Scalpel!” she called. After hitting the Shinobi, she ran back toward the rest of the Leaf Ninjas.
“Oops, looks like we ended up grabbing Shadow Clones, heh.” Toa chuckled, however, this time we won’t make any mistakes. He held up a handseal. “Jikan Toketsu no Jutsu!” The wilderness around the group of eight dimmed down. A grayscale covered the surroundings. Soon enough the grayness took over the bodies of the Shinobi, everything was masked in it. Time had frozen for everyone but the Akatsuki.
“Heh, now let’s have some fun, shall we?” Toa said. He cracked his knuckles with a grim smirk on his face. “I’ll get the two brats who pulled one over on me… Hehehehe…”
“God **** it!” Yoru shouted. “I can’t move my **** legs or arms! That girl’s Jutsu must’ve rearranged my nervous system’s paths! **** it!”
“Yoru, just rest for now. We’ll take care of this.” Kago said quietly. He put up a hand sign. “I’ll make this quick, especially since they can’t move.”
“Who can’t move?!” A shout came from the distance. In a matter of seconds a Shinobi jumped out from atop the Leaf Village Gate and came down with a fist to Toa’s face. The spectacled Shinobi wore blue sweatpants and a blue sweatshirt, covered by a green flak jacket.
“Who the hell are you!? You look like a joke!” Toa responded angrily, picking his self up fron the ground. “You’ll ******* pay for that!”
“I’m sure,” the Leaf Ninja said, holding up a hand sign of his own. “Ninja Art: Ethereal Crash!” However, nothing occurred. Everything was the same as it was when the Shinobi came.
“Ha! You’re crappy technique failed you fool!” Toa laughed, hysterically.
“You’re the fool Toa! Look there!” Kago pointed at a corner of the sky, in the grayscale there was a slight crack. The fault in the Jutsu started to grow and as it grew larger, a piece of the grayscale fell and shattered, revealing the original color and movement of anything that was masked by it.
“My technique didn’t fail, yours did.” The ****y Leaf Ninja said, adjusting his tinted glasses. While that was being said, more and more of the grayscale broke, and the Jutsu and vanished piece by piece. “Now if you ever try touching my students again, I’ll kill you, clear?” By now the grayscale had completely vanished and movement once returned to the other Leaf Ninjas.
“Ebisu!” “Ebisu-sensei!” Shouts from the now motion capable Leaf Ninja called at the surprise of their Sensei and friend. “Thanks Ebisu!” “Great job Sensei!”
“Now, leave if you don’t wish to suffer a fate that you’d rather not experience.” Ebisu threatened. His tinted glasses shined in the sun that was once again colored and high in the sky.
“We’ll be leaving alright,” Kago lifted up a hand sign, “With you! Ninja Art: Shadow Grasp Jutsu!” Suddenly, the shadows around Ebisu flickered. In the blink of an eye the shadows sprang into reality and engulfed the young Special Jonin in their trap. Once captured, the dark coffin sunk back down into the shadows, taking the Shinobi with it. “Bye now.” Kago threw smoke bombs on the ground, masking the Akatsuki in the smoke.
“Wait!” Screamed an angered Konohamaru, his hand reaching toward the smoke, he ran in the shrouded area, unaware of what was to be in there.